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Process Writing on Descriptive Text

08 May

DESCRIPTIVE text

What is Factual Descriptive Text?

It describes a particular person, place, or thing. Its purpose is to tell about the subject by describing its features without including personal opinions. A descriptive text differs from an Information Report text, because it describes a specific subject rather than a general group. Examples of Factual Descriptive texts include:

  • Description of a particular building,
  • Description of a specific animal,
  • Description of a particular place, and
  • Description of a specific person.

Structural Features of Descriptive text

Typically, a Descriptive text has an opening paragraph introducing the subject of the description, followed by a series of paragraphs (in form of text) or information (in form of paragraph). Each of them describes one feature of the subject. There can also be a final concluding section that signals the end of the description.

Grammatical Features of Descriptive text

Descriptive texts usually include:

  • Verbs in the present tense
  • Adjectives to describe the features of the subject
  • Topic sentence to begin the paragraph and organize the various aspects of the description.

Scaffold of Descriptive text

Opening
  • The statement introduces the subject to the audience.
  • It can give the audience brief details about when, where, who, or what of the subject.
  • The paragraph usually begins with a topic sentence.
  • The topic sentence previews the details that will be contained
A series of information (Body of paragraph)
  • An information should describe one feature of the subject
  • The paragraph builds the description of the subject
A concluding statement (Closing)
  • The concluding statement signals the end of the text.


 
22 Comments

Posted by on May 8, 2012 in News

 

22 responses to “Process Writing on Descriptive Text

  1. Nurjannah Deliva Putri Rusnady

    May 10, 2012 at 11:04

    ini benernya dimana sih bikin drafnya, huh,,,

     
  2. Nurjannah Deliva Putri Rusnady

    May 10, 2012 at 10:50

    European food.it called “Pasta,,Pasta,,Pasta”,,

    What do you think when i say ” PASTA”,,yummyiiiiiii,,,,you must imagine how is the of the pasta,it is very delicious taste , u wanna try ?
    Pasta has various shape ,The basic types of pasta, dry or fresh, can be further divided into categories according to their taste : Pasta asciutta and Pasta in brodo or pastina. Briefly, the term pasta asciutta describes all those substantial daily dishes such as the familiar spaghetti, Fusili, Penne, Capelinni, Fusilli bucati etc,,
    The Cooking times is vary according to the the type of pasta, but the result should be al-dente. Pasta should not be drained too thoroughly, otherwise you will find that the pasta stick together, especially Lasagne.
    As a furtner precaution cooks may add a teaspoon of oil to the water while it is still boiling to prevent the pasta from sticking together.

    for more info about Pasta and any European food, notify me on my email, lonely_pandabear87@hotmail.com

     
    • Nurjannah Deliva Putri Rusnady

      May 10, 2012 at 19:02

      I hope this information could be useful for you

       
  3. FEBRI

    May 10, 2012 at 09:41

    APPLE

    Apple is kind of fruit. You can be found in the market, indomaret, alfamart, hypermart, etc. The colours of apple is red and green, the shape is round, and the taste of apple is sweet but sometimes sour. I like apple because apple is very deliciouse fruit.

     
    • nurul

      May 10, 2012 at 12:08

      hahahahahahaha,,,,
      what kind of apple do you like febri???
      because as we know, that many kins of apple which selled in market etc

       
    • nurul

      May 10, 2012 at 16:38

      hello….
      do I mind to correct your written, still there are many mistake in your structure.

       
  4. pratiwi

    May 10, 2012 at 08:59

    For people in east java, Selekta may have been heard many times as it is one of the famous tourism object in East Java province. Selekta offers a family recreation park is nature.

    Selekta is located about 6 kilometers north of Batu central government. Selekta at about 1150 meters above sea level. Selekta give a exotic scenery of beautiful mountains. Because, Selekta is surrounded Panderman mountain, Arjuno mountain, Anjasmoro mountain, and Welirang mountain. This Selekta tourism object is about 18 hectares width. Visitor can enjoy kind of facility, such as swimming pool, 1000 flower garden, water park, out bound, flying fox, Columbus ship, fishpond, and Goa Singa (Lion Tunnel). Many kind of flower in 1000 flower garden, if the all af flower in blossom is very beautiful. Special swimming pool, water is used is the pure water from three mountain springs.

    You can enjoy the beautiful panorama in Selekta. All in all, this is a truly exciting treasure to visit.

     
    • Utha

      May 10, 2012 at 15:11

      Hi Pratiwi..
      according to me your text is interesting. It has complete for information and the sentence is good.
      From it, I can know about Selekta clearly. It fit with purpose.
      But.. I just correct you’re writing.
      You should write ‘af’ with ‘of’ -> “if the all of flower in blossom is very beautiful..”
      just a bit mistakes..
      ^_^

       
  5. nurul

    May 10, 2012 at 06:11

    Provenance of durian from Asean. Durian also coming under temporary fruit.
    The shape of this fruit is oval. But sometime we find it with circle shape. And the skin of this fruit unflawless like apple and orange , but he has thorny peel.
    When every people smell this feature of Durian from long distance, they can know if in their around within a durian. Because the durian’s smell is special.
    But, even there many weakness in Durian from the peel and smell, but don’t be on a doubt that the taste is very delicious. And every one gave chase to find it.
    And from this fruit, we can take the moral for our life. That, don’t see someone from their outside performance. But from inside their hearth.

    Durian is fruit chased by most people because the feature of delicious taste.

     
    • ririn

      May 10, 2012 at 11:33

      hmmmp, i think your discriptive text about durian is good. it is interesting for me. you can discribe durian clearly, as your purpose. there is no part that can make me confused. but, i think there is a little mistake. you shouldn’t explain about the moral value from durian. it just diskriptive text. i also don’t agree if you say that durian has delicious taste. cause i really don’t like it,,hehe^_^.
      so far, it can give me an interesting information….
      thanks a lot :)

       
  6. aLviyanche

    May 9, 2012 at 20:38

    Alun-alun Batu is a Tourism Site in Batu, East Java. Many people visite there, not only teenagers but also children.
    Alun-alun Batu is an unique place. There are an apple statue as a symbol Batu City. Many entertainment in Alun-alun batu likes a play ground, water park, lampion park, and “Bianglala”. There are two unique buildings, apple ang strawberry buildings in the south. In the centre of Alun-alun Batu has a water park with apple statue on the top. Many lampion that so beautiful, likes vegetables, friuts, and animals. for example, cabbage, carrot, apple, strawberry, orange, cow, tiger, rabbit etc. In the east, there are a ” Bianglala ” it’s so romantic.
    Alu-alun Batu is a perfect place to refreshing, you musy go to Alun-alun batu and you will get great experience.

     
    • pratiwi

      May 10, 2012 at 10:05

      I think your text is interesting for me.
      In your text, there is a vocabulary must to revised by me. it is “musy”, you should write “must”.
      I think that all, thank you

       
  7. Fitri

    May 9, 2012 at 19:21

    sushi,what do you think about sushi?Sushi is delicious food and have a various taste. In here, i’ll tell you little a bit about it. Sushi is japanese food. All of the people exactly know if sushi is famous food in japan. We can found it in japanese restaurant and absolutely expensive price. All of people and chef were agree if sushi is both delicious and healthy food as well as has nutritious because it is low fat and high in omega-3 fatty acids; the Nori/ seaweed contains iron, the vegetable contain vitamins, and the rice contains complex carbohydrates. Sushi has 3 main ingredient, they’re: shari, nori/ seaweed, salmon. Shari is japanese rice mixed with dressing consisting of rice vinegar, sugar, salt and occasionally kombu and sake. Nori is black seaweed wrappers and type algae. The last, Salmon is rich in Vitamin D. Sushi usually can be main coast or dessert. So, Sushi is very nice taste and healthy food for main coast or dessert.

     
    • Nurjannah Deliva Putri Rusnady

      May 10, 2012 at 11:18

      ahaaa i see, :D :D
      I ever ask u Sushi can be main course or dessert but u not believed :D :D wkwkwkwk
      Never mind, but u must try to taste with wasabi sauce or wasabi mayo eehhhmm yuuummiii,
      in a various Shushi like this

      Futo-maki (Thick-Rolled Sushi)
      Hoso-maki (Thin-Rolled Sushi)
      Ana-kyu-maki (Conger eel and cucumber roll)
      Chutoro-maki (Marbled tuna roll)
      Kaiware-maki (Daikon-sprout roll)
      Kampyo-maki (Dried gourd)
      Kappa-maki (Cucumber)
      Natto-maki (Fermented soybean roll)
      Negitoro-maki (Scallion and tuna roll)
      Oshinko-maki (Pickled-daikon rolls)
      Otoro-maki (Fatty tuna roll)
      Tekka-maki (Tuna)
      Tekkappa-maki (Selection of tuna and cucumber rolls)
      Umejiso-maki (Japanese ume plum and perilla-leaf roll)
      Temaki-zushi (Hand-Rolled Sushi) called “party sushi”; a cone shaped sushi held together with nori.
      Maguro-temaki (Tuna temaki)

      fitri, correct your word ” Main coast” change with ” Main course” , absolutely thats right :D

      god job fitri :) :)

       
  8. Pera_gegz

    May 9, 2012 at 19:01

    In Minang, Rendang called is Randang. That is one of the Minangkabau traditional food, the main ingredient is beef, cocounut milk and a lot of pepper.
    The food with spicy special flavor is favorite of the people and be find all of Padang restaurant in Indonesia. This food usual known Rendang Padang but Rendang is general special food in Minang.
    In 2011, CNN International crown rendang as the one list World’s 50 Most Delicious Foods. Rendang is have a lot pepper. The main ingredient is beef, beside used coconut milk and blend spices that is chili, lemongrass, ginger plant, turmeric, ginger, garlic, onion, ect.
    Unique Rendang is natural spices, where it have antiseptic and can killed patogen bacterian so that as natural preservative. Garlic, onion, ginger, dan ginger plant have the strong activity antimicrobe. So Rendang can save until four week.
    Rendang Cooking process using up many time actually until 4 hour, because that Rendang cooking must be patient. Beef slices cooked with spices and coconut milk on hot stove temperature stove and then slowly stir up till spices and coconut milk absorb to beef. After that, if it boil decreases stove temperature and stir up till coconut milk curdle and dried. This cooking process known is “caramelization”. Rendang have special and unique flavor because used many spices.

     
    • Fitri

      May 9, 2012 at 19:38

      i think your written is interest of me but there wrong word which your written is “dan” that should be “and”. maybe in other time you have to carefully when you write something.
      in other hand, your written is new information about traditional food in indonesie for me. if you not writing it maybe i will never know about respect of CNN international with rendang.
      So, thank for your information.

       
    • nurul

      May 10, 2012 at 06:14

      so there are many cultures in our country one of them as you said.
      hohohoooo….
      renang is delicious food, but why in Malang so expensive the price.

       
      • nurul

        May 10, 2012 at 06:15

        I have mistake in my writing…
        Rendang, not renang
        hehehehehehe

         
  9. Ririn

    May 9, 2012 at 18:43

    orange is a kind of fruits. now a days we can find it in the market or especially in the fruit shop. orange has two kind of colours. they are green and orange. this fruit is belong to small fruit, but there is one of this fruit that has a big size of orange standards. it usually calls Bali’s orange. orange has ruond shape and sweet taste. orange is a fresh fruit and I like it so much.

     
    • FEBRI

      May 10, 2012 at 09:57

      I think your descriptive is good,there is no mistake, so you don’t to rivising. Your descriptive is very interesting for me. I like orange too, I think orange is very fresh fruit, I like it….
      So thank you for your information about orange,,,,,,

       
  10. Utha

    May 9, 2012 at 04:43

    BNS (Batu Night Spectacular) is tourism site in Batu. Batu is opened everynight. It is place make everybody fun. There are playground, air skating is enchanted, beautiful lampion garden.
    BNS is interesting place for holiday at night.

    Utha ^_^

     
    • aLviyanche

      May 9, 2012 at 14:17

      I think it is interesting for me, I often hear about BNS ( Batu Nigth Spectaculer ) but I don’t have an opportunity to go to BNS
      Now, I will revise your text. I think your conclusion should be ” BNS is an interesting place for holiday at night”.
      But I like your written.
      thx’s. . . ^_^

       

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