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TOPIC SENTENCE

24 Mar

A topic sentence must have a subject and an attitude. It consists of a topic or subject matter and a restricting statement. Subject claims what we write about and the attitude implies Why we write. A Topic Sentence can be concluded that it is a summary of all information in the paragraph.

Compare the following topic sentences:

a. Newsweek is a magazine

b. Newsweek is an objective magazine

A Topic sentence in item (a) is not a good topic sentence. It has no attitude. It is different with the topic sentence in item (b), it has an attitude, that is objective.

A paragraph must consist of relevant information. To make sure how the topic sentence works, it should be clearer so that can control the information in the paragraph. The sentences function to help include relevant information and exclude any irrelevant ones.

The position of Topic Sentence can be: 1) at the beginning (the first sentence of paragraph), 2) in the middle (somewhere), 3) at the end (last sentence). As the beginner, if possible, we should place the topic sentence at the beginning to have a clear guide to finish the rest of paragraph and have good control over the contents (what information included), so the readers will be more prepared to follow and understand the paragraph.

A writer, besides, is responsible to develop the topic sentence, has to develop supporting ideas as well. There are two kinds of supporting sentences: 1) Major supporting sentences (MASS), and 2) Minor supporting sentences (MISS). MASS back and develop the topic sentence directly, they add and some relevant, new information about the main idea. MISS contribute useful information to the paragraph, support the MASS directly and the topic sentence indirectly.

Learn the following paragraph:

The BBC World Service radio station broadcasts various highly  selected programmes. “News Hour” might be worthwhile mentioning first. Listening to the 60-minute report from around the world, listeners can catch up with the important latest events. “Good Book” is another concrete example. The producer of this programme always chooses a new and high quality book to review. “Rock Salad” certainly should not be excluded from this list because a great number of listeners enjoy this music show. Next, we might as well mention “Drama by Radio”. Finally, we ought to consider “In Praise of God” as one of the highly assorted programmes too. Indeed, the BBC in Bush House has been admired far and wide.

What do you think about the paragraph above?

Is it a good paragraph or not? Elaborate your reason!

To write a good paragraph, we should once again develop the topic sentence well; the sentence needs to be well-supported. Every sentence, however, ought to contain a new piece of information. Otherwise, the information which is irrelevant or redundant, it must be omitted from the paragraph.

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  4. Adriana umbu leba

    November 27, 2011 at 19:43

    Name :Adriana Umbu Leba
    Class :A
    English Programme:Writing
    Year: 2011/2012
    Sumba is famous for Pasola
    Pasola is a culture of Sumba who arranged to commemorate the strungle for woman between Wanokaka and Lamboya.The game is played by throwing wooden spears to the opponent while riding a horse. The game is played by two different groups of men from different clans or tribes.
    It is a game that requires a high skill at horse riding and spear throwing skill.
    It is performed every february to march.it’s performed during one month.There are three places to perform,they are Wanokaka,Lamboya and kodi.
    Every year many tourists came to sumba island for watching pasola,but in February to march many tourists came more than other months.Sumba island is famous of sandlewood place because long time ago people in Sumba used horse for transport,for pasola and any traditional customs.Now,pasola is using horse for agriculture.If someone gets hurt or died is not good for agriculture.In sumba island there is a meadow wide area.That’s why there are many horses life in Sumba island.
    Every year Sumba always holds pasola.Horse is an animal that can make people remember about of Sumba
    Topic sentences:Sumba is famous for pasola
    Mass 1: Pasola is a culture of Sumba
    Miss 1: To commemorate the strunggle for woman between Wanokaka and Lamboya
    Miss 2: Throwing wooden spears to the opponent while riding horse
    Miss 3: Two different groups of men from different clans or tribes.
    Mass 2: It is performed February to march.
    Miss 1: It’s performed during one month.
    Miss 2: There are three places for perform,they are Wanokaka,Lamboya and Kodi
    Mass 3: It is a tourist like to watching.
    Miss 1: In February to march many tourists came more than other months.
    Mass 4: Sumba island is famous for sandlewood place.
    Miss 1: People in Sumba used horse for transport,for pasola and any tradisonal customs
    Mass 5: Pasola is using horse for agriculture
    Miss 1: If someone gets hurt or died is not good for agriculture.
    Mass 6: In Sumba island there is a meadow wide area
    Miss 1:That’s why there are many horses life in Sumba island.
    Conclution:Every year Sumba always holds pasola.Horse is an animal that can make people remember about Sumba.

     
  5. Rusla Jainudin english Class C 2011

    October 28, 2011 at 19:52

    Komodo Island
    Komodo island resort
    Komodo island was located in flores island in east part of indonesia . there were many things that was very attractive in the island which ones often come to see many kind of animals specially komodos . the komodo island had attracted visitors to visit it , so that way there are many foregners come to the island .
    To day , komodo island has been loved by many people till the government’s policy is going to make a planning to cultivation animals are in komodo island to became toursm object . right now , many ethnic from over the world grouped come to indonesia just to visit komodo island .
    The komodo island can become the highest asset to indonesia’s development , special to flores island development . the fact , the komodo island is going to be a part of the seven miracle of world .
    i do hope to you to correct my assigment above and i am so sorry if there is something wrong with that
    Thank you very much …

     
  6. Sarimah english Class C 2011

    October 28, 2011 at 19:49

    BATIK IN INDONESIA IS VERY FAMOUS IN THE WORLD
    Batik is the craft that posses value art high to become already part Indonesia culture (special javaness) . batik shirt a cloth that has decoration or pattern created by canting and cap by using to night as color barrier this technique can be applied only on the material made from natural fiber such as cotton , silk , wool and can not be applied to the cloth , made fibers (polyster).
    Batik at first to introduce in the world by president soeharto , at the time to wear batik conference PBB. Motif batik solo is batik very famous in the world . in Indonesia batik in the world . batik is a solo urban icon , motif batik solo famous with style and the traditional pattern either throughth process the cap as well as batik he wrote . the material used to the batik motif solo . still wear materials in domestic as soga java already famous since the first ,. Motif batik solo the famous among others sidomukti and sidoluhur .
    Not all people who made batik will produce the best batik because batik is needed accurate in doing it . producer who made batik must have smart skill and also must to know much about the way how to advertise it to public .
    There are many kind of batik that’s very well known in Indonesia such as solo batik , batik Madura , pekalongan batik , banyuwangi batik , and jogja batik . but all of people in Indonesia know solo batik coz the quality of it is very excellent
    In this era the price of batik more and more expensive . not all people can reach it coz batik now often export to other countries . the foregners is very love it . because of the image in batik .
    Currently batik can be found in many countries such as Indonesia , Malaysia , Thailand , idia , srilanka , and iran . basides asia batik is also very popular in some countries on the African continent . however , batik is very famous in the world is derived from Indonesia batik especially from java .

    Topic sentence : Batik in indonesia is very famous in the world
    Supporting sentence :
    1)Mass : Batik solo, pekalongan , Madura island , banyuwangi and jogja
    2)Miss : Style , process , materials in domestic , smart skill and accurate
    Concluding sentences : batik is very famous in many countries such as Indonesia it self , Malaysia , Thailand , india , and srilanka .

     
  7. tamam

    October 28, 2011 at 08:40

    Full name : Badrut Tamam
    Nick name : Tamam
    Class : C
    Address : at. Brigjen Katamso Street no.04
    Topic : Politic Education

    Responsibility for Building up Islamic Politic Education for Muslim Teenagers
    (tanggung jawab dalam membangun pendidikan politic islam bagi kalangan remaja islam)

    We know that politic education is very important in our live. Without emphasizing it of course our live won’t get progress. Even our live will be broken without politic education. Infect, the age of education is older than our age culture of ambassador. We can see in other countries like; Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and others, actually this correspondence of our politic education now was out of date, or was latest. And we still found there are youth of nation politic education who should go to school but they go to work, perfunctory, they prefer working to studying, if we still defend with the condition of course Islamic politic education won’t get progress.
    There is assumption among our people that politic education only belong to adults society belong to elite society it’s mean that teenagers including student must not be involved in politic education. Some other people say that involving student in politic mean employing them. How must politic education be conveyed to student? There are many ways actually that can be done to make the student understand about it. One of the ways are for example do writing competition the and the student are asked what they are going to do? If they become the president of the countries or the members of representative, if they become the governor, regent, or so on. This simple way can develop the student ouwerness about their sense of politic and sense of nationality.

    tamam_ semalarat@yahoo.co.id

     
  8. Adriana umbu leba.Class A

    October 27, 2011 at 18:22

    Assigment 2
    There are some reasons why Indonesia is one of the best countries for holiday.First,Indonesia has a beautiful and natural place.Second,people in Indonesia very friendly and good persons.Third,Indonesia have many tourist area,beautiful scenery and beach one of them is Bali. Fourth,Indonesia has a delicious food and many unique and diverse culture that the main attraction of the tourists.Therefore,we must preserve and promote tourism we have to be more and more visited by tourists.

     
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    July 31, 2011 at 03:02

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  10. trisnian ivianti

    April 23, 2011 at 20:32

    Topic sentences ;WORLD CUP
    MISS ; ENGLAND
    DUTCH
    BRAZIL
    GERMANI
    MASS ; 1.Goal keeper
    2.Hands ball
    3.Shooting

     
  11. Defi Yuliani non-reg 2010

    April 18, 2011 at 22:36

    Ants formicin issue farmiat acid causes acid rain. Ants are producing and using formic acid to defend themselves and to communicate between each other trough smell.
    No less than 5% of its body made up of dangerous acids. So it is not too surprising that every year these ants produce formic acid as much as 9800 million kg. Even in dense forests like the Amazon forest, the amount of acid produced is much more. Up till now, experts suspicious of smokestacks and vehicle exhaust as the ringleader of rain. Since both sulfur and nitrogen to produce components that react in the atmosphere to form acid.
    But the reality of acid rain occurred also in areas far from industrial centers. The acid is not taken or sulfuric nitric acid, but formic acid. This acid is a byproduct of formaldehide. Made in the amount of pollutants that evaporate much larger than the factory exhaust.
    To trace the origin of this acid, the experts from the United States conducting research in the Amazon jungle. Resulting in, ant formic suspected as the culprit of acid rain in the area. This problem is still not yet solved.

    Topic Sentence : Ants formicin cause acid rain.
    Mass 1 : Ants formicin issue farmiat acid causes acid rain.
    Miss 1.1 : Ants are producing and using formic acid to defend themselves and to communicate between each other trough smell.
    Mass 2 : No less than 5% of its body made up of dangerous acids.
    Miss 2.1 : So it is not too surprising that every year these ants produce formic acid as much as 9800 million kg.
    Miss 2.2 : Even in dense forests like the Amazon forest, the amount of acid produced is much more.
    Miss 2.3 : Up till now, experts suspicious of smokestacks and vehicle exhaust as the ringleader of rain.
    Miss 2.4 : Since both sulfur and nitrogen to produce components that react in the atmosphere to form acid.
    Mass 3 : But the reality of acid rain occurred also in areas far from industrial centers.
    Miss 3.1 : The acid is not taken or sulfuric nitric acid, but formic acid.
    Miss 3.2 : This acid is a byproduct of formaldehide.
    Miss 3.3 : Made in the amount of pollutants that evaporate much larger than the factory exhaust.
    Conclusion : To trace the origin of this acid, the experts from the United States conducting research in the Amazon jungle. Resulting in, ant formic suspected as the culprit of acid rain in the area. This problem is still not yet solved.

     
  12. Ali basri

    April 17, 2011 at 14:50

    Adventures in the various areas that have a big risk. ‘Climbing the mountain’ an adventurer who make the climb, it is not easy to prepare enough stock. specify both the mountain and climb equipment such as ropes, backpacks, and so forth. ‘Diving’ every person who want to dive, should have the courage high. besides diving equipment such as oxygen cylinders, diving clothes, diving goggles and place selamnya be determined.

    TS
    Adventures in the various areas that have a big risk.

    * Mass
    1. ‘Climbing the mountain’
    * Miss
    2. specify both the mountain and climb equipment such as ropes, backpacks, and
    forth.

    Mass **
    1. ‘Diving’
    Miss **
    Moreover 2.di diving equipment such as oxygen cylinders, diving clothes, diving goggles and place selamnya be determined.

     
    • ozie

      October 28, 2011 at 06:26

      Assignment 2
      Based on one of the topic sentences you’ve made, write a paragraph consisting of, at most, seven sentences.

      Fullname : USMAN FAUZI
      Nickname : OZIE
      Class : C

      English is the most important language
      I personally thing that English is the most important language, in the world why do I say that? Because English is international language, it is spoken by many people all over the word, either as a first or second language and also English is key to open the doors of scientific and technical knowledge which are needed for economic and politic development of many countries in the word. Then English is a top requirement of those seeking jobs. applicants who master either active or passive, English are more favorable than these who doesn’t, so from facts above, it is obvious that everybody needs to learn English to greet the global era.

      WRITER

      USMAN FAUZI

       
  13. matius loba dowa english class A

    April 17, 2011 at 14:20

    ==========The weakness in learning=========
    i study english in my boarding house and not long reading a book i always speak english not perfect . basically i didnt know english but i often practice to speak english in spite of i am a lone in my boarding house and my neighborhood hear my voice till they said that i am crazy after i study english i lay on my bed and then i got up and do jogging and after that activity i take a bath .although i am tired still keep my spirit to make my body healthy . in the evening i speak english a lone with loud voice to make perfect of my vocabularies .

     
  14. matius loba dowa english class A

    April 17, 2011 at 13:57

    topic sentence : the beautiful of waingapu city
    mass 1 :matawai
    miss 1.1 : lambakara
    miss 1.2.: lewa
    mass 2 : langgaliru
    miss 2.1 : anakalang
    miss 2.2 : waikabubak
    conclusion : in sumba there is the beautiful place its name is waingapu and also in it there are many other place is like matawai , langgaliru and the both of it can spicific is like in matawai there is lambakara (traditional custom) , lewa (farming area) and besides , langgaliru there are anakalang (traditional market “surumeme”) , and waikabubak (the place where tourist visit to enjoy the beautiful scenery).

     
  15. apliana malo english class A

    April 17, 2011 at 13:47

    Topic Sentence: the beauty of sumba culture
    MaSS 1: tambolaka
    MiSS 1.1:tarian woleka
    MiSS 1.2: kataga
    MaSS 2: waimangura
    MiSS 2.1: pinang
    MiSS 2.2: kopi
    the culture of sumba has many place and in the place also there are many tourism object is like tambolaka and its wellknown with tarian woleka and kataga . besides , the second place is waimagurah and in the place there are pinang tree and tree kopi that will become the equepmet of the traditional in sumba.

     
  16. rina rachmawati

    April 15, 2011 at 10:09

    THE FAMILY
    I have family, we live at Kepanjen city. My name is Mrs Rachma. I am is housewife. Now I study in Budi Utomo University, I take English department. Mr. Kusmana is my husband. He is a leader at the home. He is a teacher in Elementary school. Najela Anjani blessingme is my old daughter. She is 9th old year in may this year. She is third class on the elementary school. The second, her name is najwa khan blessingme. She is 4th old year in April this year. So, in June next two month later, She will enter to primary school. She is charming child, happily and funny cause she has curly the hair. The youngest daughter, her name is Shebrina Putri blessingme. She has slanting’s eyes and bald’s hair. Sometime, she look like a boy, but when she wears a jilbab she is looked beautiful. Praise be to Allah, My family is a highest property in my life and I hope in whole my life God bestow us and always life in sakinah, mawaddah wa rahmah. Amen.
    Topic sentence : I have family, we live at Kepanjen city
    1.Mass 1 : My name is Mrs Rachma.
    Miss 1 .1 : I am is housewife .
    Miss 1.2 : Now I study in Budi Utomo University, I take English department.
    2.Mass 2 : Mr. Kusmana is my husband.
    Miss 2.1 : He is a leader at the home.
    Miss 2.2 : He is a teacher in Elementary school.
    3.Mass 3 : Najela Anjani blessingme is my old daughter.
    Miss 3.1 : She is 9th old year in may this year.
    Miss 3.2 : She is third class on the elementary school.
    4.Mass 4 : The second, her name is najwa khan blessingme.
    Miss 4.1 : She is 4th old year in April this year.
    Miss 4.2 : So, in June next two month later, She will enter to primary school.
    Miss 4.3 : She is charming child, happily and funny cause she has curly the hair.
    5.Mass 5 : The youngest daughter, her name is Shebrina Putri blessingme.
    Miss 5.1 : She has slanting’s eyes and bald’s hair.
    Miss 5.2 : Sometime, she look like a boy, but when she wears a jilbab she is looked beautiful.
    The Conclusion : Praise be to Allah, My family is a highest property in my life and I hope in whole my life God bestow us and always life in sakinah, mawaddah wa rahmah. Amen.
    Name : Rina Rachmawati (2101001320045)
    Departement : English non Regular
    University : IKIP Budi Utomo Malang

     
  17. Liswati

    April 15, 2011 at 09:40

    LISWATI (Non-Reg 2010)
    Revised

    How to protect yourself especially at home. 1) Be sure that your doors and windows are saved. French door with double key and sliding doors are more comfortable. 2) Shine your home brightly, especially at the front and back of your home. If any bushes around your entrances, cut it first. Because thieve can easily hide. 3) Never open your door to someone that you don’t recognized him 4) When you call the repairman, and you sure of his credential, but you still anxiety; try to call your neighbor or your friend to company you. 5) When you call the repairman, and you sure of his credential, but you still anxiety, try to call your neighbor or your friend to company you. 6) When you found stranger man with stranger act in your house, just get out from your home. It can prevent you from something serious like killed. 7) If you leave alone, don’t show it. Give the impression that you live with a roommate. That’s way, you must be careful in every time and everywhere because sometimes a crimes come when the chance’ there.

    Topic Sentences : The way to protect our self especially at home
    MASS : Be sure that your doors and windows are saved
    MISS : French door with double key and sliding doors are more comfortable
    MASS : Shine your home brightly
    MISS : especially at the front and back of your home
    MISS : If any bushes around your entrances, cut it first
    MASS : Never open your door to someone that you don’t recognized him
    MASS : When you anxiety with a repairman that you called try to call your neighbor or your friend to company you.
    MASS : When you found stranger man with stranger act in your house, just get out from your home
    MISS : It can prevent you from something serious like killed
    MASS : If you leave alone, don’t show it.
    MISS : Give the impression that you live with a roommate
    Conclusion : That’s way, you must be careful in every time and everywhere because sometimes a crimes come when the chance’

     
  18. armini (Ikip Budi Utomo/non reg/2101001320111)

    April 14, 2011 at 22:12

    REVISI

    1. Topic : The role of mother in household
    a. Mass 1: Wife
    -Miss 1.1: As friend and life partner
    -Miss 1.2: Of encouragement to her husband
    -Miss 1.3: as a wise advisor
    b. Mass 2: Mother
    -Miss 2.1: Pregnant
    -Miss 2.2: Gave Birth
    -Miss 2.3: Meet all the need of children
    c. Mass 3: Household Manager
    -Miss 3.1: Foster Families
    -Miss 3.2: Manage the family economy
    -Miss 3.3: Produce a good quality family
    d. Mass 4: Primary Educator
    -Miss 4.1: Establishment Mindset
    -Miss 4.2: Spiritual Advisor
    -Miss 4.3: Giver stimulation for the child’s development
    Conclusion
    The Role of Mother in Household
    The role of mothers in the households are as wife, mother, household manager and primary educator. In his role as a wife accompanying her husband, a wife should be able to be friend and life partner when her husband had a problem and at that time a wife can be consulted about the problems facing her husband. When her husband faced difficult problems both in employment, business and other problem, a wife can be appear as a helper or even as a wise advisor so a wife can be give motivation and encouragement to her husband and this would support the husband’s career.
    The role of women in the figure of a mother has created a new life since the first a woman is pregnant and gave birth to her baby, then care and meet all the needs of children
    As a household manager, a mother prosecuted to be foster families and this requires well planning and professional management. A mother must be make arrangement for all household affairs which can be divided into several divisions: start of the financial affairs, education until manage the family economy. If a mother is able to manage good management so can produce a good quality family.
    The next special task is that mothers are the primary educators for their children. A mother has a duty to educate their children since children still in the womb to adulthood. Education of the mother brought the main influence for the establishment of child mindset, education both in terms of spiritual advice to stimulate the development of children. So if education is applied in the family is good, so will get high quality family.
    Conclusion:
    The role of mother in household is very important, because the mother role as wife, mother, household manager and primary education, will greatly determine the success of a family and if a mother is able to manage good management so can produce a good quality family.

     
  19. Mochamad Ali Akbar

    April 14, 2011 at 19:36

    Nama : Mochamad Ali Akbar
    NPM : 2101001320347
    Kelas / Semest. : Ekstensi (Non Regular) / 2
    Program Studi : Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris
    Fakultas : Fakultas Pendidikan Ilmu Sosial Humaniora
    Angkatan : 2010

    REVISI

    SMA ISLAM PUJON
    SMA Islam Pujon is one of high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” in the region only Pujon. This Institution has been established since 1983 until now. In the last three years Islamic high school of Pujon has increased and be able to carve the achievement by graduating 100%, respectively, with maximum results. In this case the SMA Islam Pujon have significant components (specifically) in supporting the success of the institution it self. The first is a teacher, a teacher or educator is someone who has an important role in education. Without a teachers or educators teaching-learning process will not run in accordance with desired goals, the average of teachers in this institution has been certification, with a certification’s teacher then can be said that educators in Islamic high school of Pujon was professionals in implementing learning tasks in order to achieve national education goals. The second is students, in this case the student becomes subject to be educated by a teacher. The students of this institution from different levels. And most of the students 75% come from the area Pujon surrounding and 25% came from other regions such as; Ngantang and Batu. Then, the third part is extracurricular. Extracurricular is an important component in supporting, developing and enhancing an intelligence of students. Extracurricular contained in these intitution include ECC (English Conversation Club), Voice of SMA in the form of bulletin magazine, Scout of high school, PMR and much more. The next is the facilities and infrastructure. Facilities and infrastructure in Islamic high school Pujon, after 2009 has increased, and changes in the field of technology. In addition, facilities and infrastructure in supporting the learning process like supply of books contained in the library of this institution is very inadequate, both of fiction and non fiction as well as other books that support students’ learning. So SMA Islam Pujon is high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” which can be categorized schools that have the best components in achieving Learning of National’s Goal in environmental community.

    Explaination (Detail):

    Topik : SMA ISLAM PUJON
    Idea : SMA Islam Pujon is one of high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” in the region only Pujon. This Institution has been established since 1983 until now. In the last three years Islamic high school of Pujon has increased and be able to carve the achievement by graduating 100%, respectively, with maximum results
    Mass 1 : The first is a teacher, a teacher or educator is someone who has an important role in education.
    Miss 1.1 :Without a teachers or educators teaching-learning process will not run in accordance with desired goals.
    Miss 1.2 :The average of teachers in this institution has been certification, with a certification’s teacher then can be said that educators in Islamic high school Pujon was professionals in implementing learning tasks in order to achieve national education goals.
    Mass 2 : The second is students; in this case the student becomes subject to be educated by a teacher.
    Miss2.1 : The students of this institution from different levels
    Miss2.2 : Most of the students 75% come from the area Pujon surrounding and 25% came from other regions such as; Ngantang and Batu
    Mass 3 : Then, the third part is extracurricular
    Miss3.1 : Extracurricular is an important component in supporting, developing and enhancing an intelligence of students
    Miss3.2 : Extracurricular contained in these institution include ECC (English Conversation Club), Voice of SMA in a form of bulletin magazine, Scout of high school, PMR and much more
    Mass4 : The next is the facilities and infrastructure
    Miss4.1 : Facilities and infrastructure in Islamic high school Pujon, after 2009 has increased, and changes in the field of technology
    Miss4.2 : In addition, facilities and infrastructure in supporting the learning process like supply of books contained in the library of this institution is very inadequate, both of fiction and non fiction as well as other books that support students’ learning

    Conclusion : So SMA Islam Pujon is high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” which can be categorized schools that have the best components in achieving Learning of National’s Goal in environments community.

     
  20. armini

    April 14, 2011 at 10:08

    1. Topic : The role of mother in household
    a. Mass 1: Wife
    -Miss 1.1: As friend and life partner
    -Miss 1.2: Of encouragement to her husband
    -Miss 1.3: as a wise advisor
    b. Mass 2: Mother
    -Miss 2.1: Pregnant
    -Miss 2.2: Gave Birth
    -Miss 2.3: Meet all the need of children
    c. Mass 3: Household Manager
    -Miss 3.1: Foster Families
    -Miss 3.2: Manage the family economy
    -Miss 3.3: Produce a good quality family
    d. Mass 4: Primary Educator
    -Miss 4.1: Establishment Mindset
    -Miss 4.2: Spiritual Advisor
    -Miss 4.3: Giver stimulation for the child’s development
    Conclusion
    The Role of Mother in Household
    The role of mothers in the households are as wife, mother, household manager and primary educator. In his role as a wife accompanying her husband, a wife should be able to be friend and life partner when her husband had a problem and at that time a wife can be consulted about the problems facing her husband. When her husband faced difficult problems both in employment, business and other problem, a wife can be appear as a helper or even as a wise advisor so a wife can be give motivation and encouragement to her husband and this would support the husband’s career.
    The role of women in the figure of a mother has created a new life since the first a woman is pregnant and gave birth to her baby, then care and meet all the needs of children
    As a household manager, a mother prosecuted to be foster families and this requires well planning and professional management. A mother must be make arrangement for all household affairs which can be divided into several divisions: start of the financial affairs, education until manage the family economy. If a mother is able to manage good management so can produce a good quality family.
    The next special task is that mothers are the primary educators for their children. A mother has a duty to educate their children since children still in the womb to adulthood. Education of the mother brought the main influence for the establishment of child mindset, education both in terms of spiritual advice to stimulate the development of children. So if education is applied in the family is good, so will get high quality family.
    Conclusion:
    The role of mother in household is very important, because the mother role as wife, mother, household manager and primary education, will greatly determine the success of a family and if a mother is able to manage good management so can produce a good quality family.

     
  21. Endang Sri Utami

    April 13, 2011 at 20:02

    Name : Endang Sri Utami
    NPM : 2101001320216

    Writing

    I have read a vacancy in a newspaper as the executive marketing. It is needed female; maximum 25 years old, scholarship, good in performance and behavior. She must expert to operate Microsoft office, especially Microsoft Word, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Power Point. She must have the experience in marketing job for 2 years. The company will give the high salary. It is about $ 500 – $ 1000. If she can to overload the target, she will receive more than it. I interest with this vacancy, but my age more than 25 years. So, I can’t joint with it.

    The topic is A vacancy as the executive marketing
    1. Mass 1 : Female
    Miss 1 : Max 25 years old
    Miss 2 : Scholarship
    Miss 3 : good in performance & behavior
    2. Mass 2: expert to operate MS. Office
    Miss 1 : MS. Word
    Miss 2 : MS. Excel
    Miss 3 : MS. Power Point
    3. Mass 3: Has experience for 2 years
    4. Mass 4 : High salary
    Miss 1 : about $ 500 – $1000
    Miss 2 : more than it, if overload the target

     
  22. azizah nur imanah

    April 13, 2011 at 14:19

    BOROBUDUR TEMPLE

    Borobudur temple is one of the most beautiful tourist resorts in Indonesia. It is situated in central Java. Borobudur temple is one of the seven wonders of the world, which needs to be preserved its circumstances. The people all over the world know that Borobudur is one of the greatest art works that ever known since long time ago. Borobudur temple was built by syailendra Dynasti during the eight century. It needed more than two million river stones it is the biggest temple in the world. After going into some restorations. Borobudur is visited by more and more tourist, both domestic and foreign tourist. Most of them admire Borobudur temple because of it’s beauty, its elegance and the story of the relief on its walls. Domestic tourist usually go there by bus or private cars, while foreign tourists like to join travel bureau because they don’t need to think of the transportation accommodation and itinerary. There are some money changers around the location. It makes them easier to change their money. But some of them like to bring credit cards and checks.

    IDENTIFY
    Topic Sentences : Borobudur temple is one of the most beautiful yourist resort in Indonesia.
    Mass 1 : Borobudur temple is one of the seven wonders of the world, which needs to be reserved is circumtances.
    Miss 1.1 : The people all over the world know that Borobudur is one of the greatest art works that ever known since long time ago.
    Mass 2 : Borobudur temple was built by Syailendra Dynasti during the eight century.
    Miss 2.1 : It needed more than two million river stones.
    Mass 3 : Borobudur is visited by more and more tourist, both domestic and foreign tourist.
    Miss 3.1 : Most of them admire Borobudur temple because of its beauty, its elegance and the story of the relief on its walls.
    Mass 4 : Domestic tourist usually go there by bus or private cars, while foreign tourist like to join travel bureau because they don’t need to think of the transportation, accommodation, and itinerary.
    Miss 4.1 : There are some money changers around the location.
    Miss 4.2 : Its makes them easier to change their money
    miss 4.3 : But some of them to bring credit cards and checks.
    Conclusion : Borobudur Temple is the biggest temple in the world

     
  23. iis astutik non reg 2010

    April 13, 2011 at 12:52

    sorry sir
    how about my assignment ?
    why you not replay at my email

     
  24. beny ari hakam

    April 11, 2011 at 15:35

    The Mosque
    The mosque has many activities and also arrangement mosque “Taqmir”
    Activities in mosque
    Like building of mosque and
    Young mosque (Remas)
    The activities in mosque is learning of read holy qur’an and learning tajwid.
    Arrangement mosque has protection is chief of village
    arrangement mosque has leader is chief of mosque(Taqmir),the personality secretary and treasurer in mosque
    In the mosque has many sections
    1.section education has chief and personality
    2.section cleaning has chief and personality
    3.section security has chief and personality
    4section equipment has chief and personality
    Topic sentence :The Mosque has many activities and also arrangement mosque “Taqmir”
    Mass(1)Activities in mosque
    Miss(1.1) Like building of mosque and
    Miss(1.2)Young mosque (Remas)
    The activities in mosque is learning of read holy qur’an and learning tajwid.
    Mass(2)Arrangement mosque has protection is chief of village
    Miss(1.1)arrangement mosque has leader is chief of mosque(Taqmir),the personality secretary and treasurer in mos
    Miss(1.2)In the mosque has many sections
    1.section education has chief and personality
    2.section cleaning has chief and personality
    3.section security has chief and personality
    4section equipment has chief and personality
    Nama :Beny ari hakam
    Npm:2101001320192
    Kelas :Non Reg(2010)Pendidikan bahasa inggris

     
  25. Diana Feronika

    April 9, 2011 at 16:28

    Name : Diana Feronika
    NPM : 2101101320337

    I will tell you about my mother. She is a good mother. She gives me a lot of attention and love her child. Beside that, she is patient and always support me in everything. She is a hard worker. She is a widow and has 3 kids that’s why she has to working hard for their child. My mother is very wise. She is not quick-tempered when her children made a mistake. My mother always asked gently to find the subject of matter. My mother was a devout in worship. She never forgot to pray and follow the activities related with her religion. For me she is my everything and I love him very much.

    Topic Sentence :I will tell you about my mother.
    MaSS 1 : She is a good mother.
    MiSS 1.1 : She gives me a lot of attention and love her child.
    MiSS 1.2 : Beside that, she is patient and always support me in everything.
    MaSS 2 : She is a hard worker.
    MiSS 2.1 : She is a widow and has 3 kids that’s why she has to working hard for their child.
    MaSS 3 : My mother is very wise.
    MiSS 3.1 : She is not quick-tempered when her children made a mistake.
    MiSS 3.2 : My mother always asked gently to find the subject of matter.
    MaSS 4 : My mother was a devout in worship.
    MiSS 4.1 : She never forgot to pray and follow the activities related with her religion.
    Conclusion : For me she is my everything and I love him very much.

     
  26. Lilis Yuliani

    April 9, 2011 at 15:13

    im sorry sir yesterday, i have mistake for sending to mr Andika…

     
  27. Lilis Yuliani

    April 9, 2011 at 15:11

    Characteristic of My Idol Father
    I love all of part from my family. My father, mother, brother but my idol is my father. My farther have characteristic and it make me pround to him. He is responsible to our family. He always complete our necessity. Give attention to our education, and also to our family financial. He also religious man. Diligent praying to ALLAH, and always join to activity religion. Beside of that , he is a principle person. He has strong of principle, difficult receive instigation from another person. And the last , he also romantic person, he loyal to my mother, the reality along 26 years they have been married, i hope until the end ….. he also love to our family and we love too. So if im ready to married i want to have husband like my father.

    Topic sentence : Characteristic of My Idol Father
    1. MaSS 1 : He is responsible to our family
    MiSS 1.1 : He always complete our necessity
    MiSS 1.2 : Give attention to our education, and also to our family financial
    2. MaSS 2 : He also religious man.
    MiSS 2.1 : Diligent praying to ALLAH
    MiSS 2.2 : and always join to activity religion
    3. MaSS 3 : Beside of that , he is a principle person.
    MiSS 3.1 : has strong of principle
    MiSS 3.2 : difficult receive instigation from another person.
    4. MaSS 4 : he also romantic person
    Miss 4.1 : he loyal to my mother, the reality along 26 years they have been married
    MiSS 4.2 : he also love to our family and we love too
    Conclusion :
    So if im ready to married i want to have husband like my father.

    Name : Lilis Yuliani
    NPM : 2101000320171

     
  28. Tuah

    April 9, 2011 at 15:10

    English for Professional is now very important. English for Tourism for example. It can used for guide. It is also used in hotel. Or it is good for tour driver to do the task.
    English for Economy. It is very useful for banker. The clerk also needs to study it. English must always be important for the officer. Education needs English to increase the skill of it. Teacher should use English to teach. And how to teach English well is to make the students understand it. English for testing is designed to test the students’ ability. English for Translator is very specific thing. They must understand about reading comprehension. They also need many vocabularies. And grammar is also needed for them. That’s why English is very useful for all professions.

    Topic Sentence :English for Professional is now very important.

    1. Mass : English for Tourism for example.
    – Miss 1.1 :It can used for guide.
    – Miss 1.2 : It is also used in hotel.
    – Miss 1.3 : Or it is good for tour driver to do the task.

    2. Mass : English for Economy.
    – 2.1 :It is very useful for banker.
    – 2.2 :The clerk also needs to study it.
    – 2.3 :English must always be important for the officer.

    3. Mass : Education needs English to increase the skill of it.
    – 3.1 : Teacher should use English to teach.
    – 3.2 :And how to teach English well is to make the students understand it.
    – 3.3 : English for testing is designed to test the students’ ability.

    4. Mass : English for Translator is very specific thing.
    – 4.1 : They must understand about reading comprehension.
    – 4.2 : They also need many vocabularies.
    – 4.3 : And grammar is also needed for them.

    CONCLUSION : English is very useful for all professions.

     
  29. Tuah

    April 9, 2011 at 15:03

    Topic Sentence :English for Professional is now very important.

    1. Mass : English for Tourism for example.
    – Miss 1.1 :It can used for guide.
    – Miss 1.2 : It is also used in hotel.
    – Miss 1.3 : Or it is good for tour driver to do the task.

    2. Mass : English for Economy.
    – 2.1 :It is very useful for banker.
    – 2.2 :The clerk also needs to study it.
    – 2.3 :Enlish must always be important for the officer.

    3. Mass : Education needs English to increase the skill of it.
    – 3.1 : Teacher should use English to teach.
    – 3.2 :And how to teach English well is to make the students understand it.
    – 3.3 : English for testing is designed to test the students’ ability.

    4. Mass : English for Translator is very specific thing.
    – 4.1 : They must understand about reading comprehension.
    – 4.2 : They also need many vocabularies.
    – 4.3 : And grammar is also needed for them.

    CONCLUSION : English is very useful for all professions.

     
  30. Endang Sri Utami

    April 8, 2011 at 20:53

    Name : Endang Sri Utami
    NPM : 2101001320216

    Writing

    I have read a vacancy in a newspaper as the executive marketing. It is needed female; maximum 25 years old, scholarship, good in performance and behavior. She must expert to operate Microsoft office, especially Microsoft Word, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Power Point. She must have the experience in marketing job for 2 years. The company will give the high salary. It is about $ 500 – $ 1000. If she can to overload the target, she will receive more than it. I interest with this vacancy, but my age more than 25 years. So, I can’t joint with it.

    The topic is A vacancy as the executive marketing
    1. Mass 1 : Female
    Miss 1 : Max 25 years old
    Miss 2 : Scholarship
    Miss 3 : good in performance & behavior
    2. Mass 2: expert to operate MS. Office
    Miss 1 : MS. Word
    Miss 2 : MS. Excel
    Miss 3 : MS. Power Point
    3. Mass 3: Has experience for 2 years
    4. Mass 4 : High salary
    Miss 1 : about $ 500 – $1000
    Miss 2 : more than it, if overload the target

     
  31. Niatul Chasila(ikip Budi utomo/2101001320175 )

    April 8, 2011 at 17:42

    I am graduate from very excellent school. I have so many reason that supporting my statement about that. First, all of the teacher are best of the best. From their teaching quality. Which I am very proud of that. They always create good condition in the class , Students are easy to understand what their explanation about. second, System in our school is very good. Everything become good if the system is good also. My headmaster always fixs everything which is not good. Both of Teachers and Students must be enjoy and realized that what they done is important for their life, So my Head Master create the best system for our school. Third, the medium in my school is almost perfect. all we need are suitable there. Beginning from the smallest things until the biggest things are good. The last, guaranted graduate, because all of them are accepted in goverment university not only in national but also international level.i think It is amazing. I am so proud of my school. Thanks for teachers and headmaster who have guide me.

    Topic sentence: I am a graduate from very excellent school
    MASS I : All of the teacher are best of the best
    MISS I.I : They always create good condition in the class
    MISS I.II: Students are easy to understand what their explanation about
    MASS II: the system in our school is very good
    MIIS II.I: everything become good if the system is good also
    MIIS II.II: my headmaster always fixs everything which is not good
    MASS III: the medium is almost perfect
    MISS III.I: all we need are suitable there
    MISS III.II:from the smallest things until the biggest things
    MASS IV: guaranted graduate
    MISS IV.I :all of them are accepted in government university
    MISS IV.II: not only in nationl but also in international level

     
  32. abdul hadi setiawan

    April 7, 2011 at 22:53

    Name : Abdul hadi setiawan
    class : Non reg 2010 (english department)

    There are many ways for us to help the others.If you are singer you can charity our voice,like some famous singers in jakarta they hold charity concerts.or if you are a painter you can sell your painting and you can donate the proceeds.or if you have skill to make some sculpture you can make and sell your sculpture,like some statue maker in USA,they make a camel sculpture and the paint it with beautiful color.but if you do not money or skill to donate,you can still donate your blood ,you can donate your blood in hospital.or if you don’t have anything you can still contribute with prayer.That it some way to help others. There are many ways to help the others,just not with money.

    Topic sentence : there are many ways for us to help the others
    Mass 1 : if you are singer you can charity your voice
    Miss 1.1 : hold charity concerts
    Mass 2 : if you are painter
    Miss 2.1 :sell your painting and donate the proceeds
    Mass 3 : if you are statue maker
    Miss 3.1 : sell your sculpture
    Miss 3.2 : some statue in USA make a camel sclupture
    Mass 4 : if you do not money or skill
    Miss 4.1 : donate your blood
    Mass 5 : if you don’t have anything
    Miss 5.1 : contribute with prayer

    conclusion : There are many ways to help the others,just not with money.

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      April 7, 2011 at 22:59

      Well done!! I like your ideas. The Topic and Conclusion are already relevant

       
  33. susanti agustinah

    April 7, 2011 at 22:00

    You can’t be as strong as Popeye although you eat as much spinach
    as possible. Popeye the sailor is one of the most successful advertising cartoon figures ever made. But it is built on a wrong myths about spinach. Eating lots of spinach gives you iron. Spinach is a prime source of beta-carotene-the antioxidant. That is proving valuable in the prevention of various types of cancers, especially lung cancer. Spinach however, contains so much chlorophyll that the beta-carotene color is disguised. Energy comes from vitamins are wrong. It is converted from calories in fat, carbohydrates and protein. The vitamins have no calories and therefore to the body. To think eating lots of spinach would make you as strong as Popeye is just food myths.

    Topic Sentence :You can’t as strong as Popeye although you eat as much spinach as
    possible
    Mass I : Popeye the sailor is one of the most successful advertising cartoon
    figures made
    ~Miss I.1 : But it is built on a wrong myths about spinach
    ~Miss I.2 : Eating lots of spinach gives you iron
    Mass II : Spinach is a prime source of beta-carotene-the antioxidant
    ~Miss II.1 : That is proving valuable in the prevention of various types of
    cancers, especially lung cancer
    ~Miss II.2 : Spinach however, contains so much chlorophyll that the beta-
    carotene color is disguised
    Mass III : Energy comes from vitamins are wrong
    ~Miss III.1 : It is converted from calories in fat, carbohydrates and protein
    ~Miss III.2 : The vitamins have no calories and therefore provide no additional
    energy to the body
    Conclusion : To think eating lots of spinach would make you as strong as Popeye
    is just food myths

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      April 7, 2011 at 23:05

      So, what is your point exactly? Talking about the spinach or “the Popeye the Sailor”?
      You can make it relevant by linking each idea. The Topic sentence and MASS 1 need to be checked.

       
  34. jumiati elida yuni

    April 7, 2011 at 21:51

    Road Safety Begis at Scholl is program of safety campaign of riding which need to be held this time because hundreds of accidents were dominated by students. Unstable emotion and lack of awareness of riding were the major cause of accidents.

    School as a place for study ought to take responsibility and make an action immediately. Work along with police departement esspecially traffic division is one way to raise student’s awareness of road safety but also build better relations with the police.

    Topic sentence: Road Safety Begins at Scholl
    Mass I: is program of safety campaign of riding which need to be held this time because hundreds of accident were dominated by students.
    Miss I.I: unstable emotion and lack of awareness of riding.
    Mass 2: School as a place for study
    Miss 2.I: take responsibility and make an action immediately.
    Conclusion: Work along with police departement esspecially traffic division is one way to raise student’s awareness of road safety but also build better relations with the police.

    Name: Jumiati Elida Yuni
    Class: English non reg 2010

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      April 7, 2011 at 23:12

      I like your idea, but there is still need any improvement, such as your idea in MASS 2; “school as a place of study”. Does the MISS 2.1 support the MASS 2?

      Mass 2: School as a place for study
      Miss 2.I: take responsibility and make an action immediately.

      What is the connection between them?

       
      • jumiati elida yuni

        April 16, 2011 at 06:29

        dear sir..
        this is my new assingment cos i dont have any idea bout safety riding. i wrote these paragraghs cos i ve ever be apart of them, n it was totally hard, tried to be a vegan when people easily ate chicken, meat or eegs around me.

        Vegans. A vegetarian is someone who only eats fruits, vegetables, grains, cereals, nuts and seeds. They do not eat fish, meat or poultry (for example chicken or turkey), and sometimes they avoid dairy products and eggs as well. Some vegetarians, however, keep all animal produck out of their lives. These kinds of vegetarians are called vegans.
        Vegans not only refuse to eat meat and fish; they also avoid to drinking milk and eating cheese, eggs, honey and butter, because all of these foods come from animals. Many vegans feel that eating food derivesd from animals o using anything produced from animals is a form of animal abuse. Vegans refuse to buy or wear animal products, such as wool, leather or silk. What is more, vegans do not use health care products such as soap, shampoo or cosmetics that have been tested on animals. Vegans strive to lead a “cruelty-free” life style, and are often very aware of animal right issues.

        Topic sentence : Vegans.
        Mass 1 : A vegetarian is someone who only eats fruits, vegetables, grains, cereals, nuts and seeds.
        Miss 1.1 : They do not eat fish, meat or poultry (for example chicken or turkey).
        Miss 1.2 : sometimes they avoid dairy products and eggs as well.
        Conclusion : Some vegetarians, however, keep all animal produck out of their lives. These kinds of vegetarians are called vegans.
        Mass 2. : Vegans not only refuse to eat meat and fish;
        Miss 2.1 : they also avoid to drinking milk and eating cheese, eggs, honey and butter, because all of these foods come from animals.
        Miss 2.2 : Many vegans feel that eating food derivesd from animals o using anything produced from animals is a form of animal abuse.
        Miss 2.3 : Vegans refuse to buy or wear animal products, such as wool, leather or silk.
        Miss 2.4 : What is more, vegans do not use health care products such as soap, shampoo or cosmetics that have been tested on animals.
        Conclusion : Vegans strive to lead a “cruelty-free” life style, and are often very aware of animal right issues

         
  35. siti fajar istiqomah

    April 7, 2011 at 21:33

    Siti Fajar Istiqomah NR 2010
    Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris
    Newspaper Without Paper
    A moment later, all kinds of newspapers, tabloids, magazines or paper form will be eliminated from the face of the earth. Print media history because in the end missed the train. The print media will run over the flow of information revolution will start rolling. This phenomenon would occur several years to come.
    Newspapers and magazines that appear later all-electronic. Magazines can be packaged as two boards were held together, folded. It looked like a laptop computer, but it has two screens on either face, as wide as magazine pages. Therein news magazines, advertisements, and photographs are presented. For the next edition, the customer just attach the new disk, and editor of the magazine will send complete information over the network more quickly and efficiently.
    Magazine or newspaper is not too heavy, perhaps even weighs less than an ounce, thus, an electronic magazine that can carry anywhere, read in the car, airplane, or while lying on the couch. The information that appears on the screen, whether text, images, photos, and ads of course ignore the matter of harmony layout, typology letters, or color composition.
    The newspaper continues to be very much in demand by customers. In addition to practical electronic magazine also considered more modern and easier it will be in demand by all circles.
    Topic Sentence : Newspaper without paper
    Mass 1 : A moment later, all kinds of newspapers, tabloids, magazines or paper form will be eliminated from the face of the earth.
    Miss 1.1 : Print media history because in the end missed the train.
    Miss 1.2 : print media will run over the flow of information revolution will start rolling.
    Mass 2 : Newspapers and magazines that appear later all-electronic.
    Miss 2.1 : Magazines can be packaged as two boards were held together.
    Miss 2.2 : folded.
    Miss 2.3 : It looked like a laptop computer.
    Mass 3 : Magazine or newspaper is not too heavy.
    Miss 3.1 : weighs less than an ounce.
    Miss 3.2 : Newspaper that can carry anywhere
    Miss 3.3 : read in the car, airplane, or while lying on the couch.
    Mass 4 : The newspaper continues to be very much in demand by customers.
    Miss 4.1 : In addition to practical electronic magazine.
    Miss 4.2 : more modern.
    Miss 4.3 : easier t will be in demand by all circles. .

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      April 7, 2011 at 23:15

      So what is your conclusion miss?

       
      • siti fajar istiqomah

        April 9, 2011 at 14:30

        conclusion : newspaper will be eliminated from the face of the earth ..

         
  36. EKA PRASTIYOWATI

    April 7, 2011 at 21:23

    Barong Si Pencuri Hati Warga Bali

    Barong” is the magical protector of balinese villages. Wits its long mane and fantastic fanged mask, he is the opponent of “ Rangda”. Rangda is the witch. He rules over the spirit of darkness. Barong and Rangda are opposed in a never ending fight. They are good and evil. The fight of barong and Rangda “is also the topic of traditional story. The most famous is the story of ‘’Calonarang”. The widow from jirah is furious because she cannot find a proper husband for her daughter Ratna Manggali. The youths are all scared of her black magic.
    She yents revenge by wreaking havoc over the kingdom of Daha. The king erlangga tries to punish her but all his attempts fail. The furious kills all soldier he sends to destroy her. Rangda decides to destroy daha. She summons all her disclipes and they go in depth of the night to the Setra Gendramayu cemetery, to present offs rings of dead flesh to “ Durga “ the goddess of death. Durga consent to the destruction, although she advises the witch not to enter the city of Daha. The wicth does not heedthe advice.
    The kingdom is soon hit by”grubug” ( Pandemic ) and villagesbecome cemeteries as people die even before they can bury their dead. Corpses are scattered everywhere, and the stench is unbearable. The only person able to defeat the witch is Mpu Baradah. At the king request, Baradah sends his disciple bahula to steal the witch magic weapon of calonarang. To approach her, bahula pretends to ask for ratna manggali’s hands.
    Topic sentence : Barong” is the magical protector of balinese villages.
    1. Mass : Wits its long mane and fantastic fanged mask, he is the opponent of “ Rangda”.
    Miss 1.1 : Barong and Rangda are opposed in a never ending fight. They are good and evil.
    Miss 1.2 : The fight of barong and Rangda “is also the topic of traditional story.
    2. Mass : The most famous is the story of ‘’Calonarang”.
    Miss 2.1 : The widow from jirah is furious because she cannot find a proper husband for her daughter Ratna Manggali.
    Miss 2.2 : The youths are all scared of her black magic.
    3. Mass : The king erlangga tries to punish her but all his attempts fail.
    Miss 3.1 : The furious kills all soldier he sends to destroy her.
    Miss 3.2 : She summons all her disclipes and they go in depth of the night to the Setra Gendramayu cemetery, to present offs rings of dead flesh to “ Durga “ the goddess of death.
    4. Mass : The kingdom is soon hit by”grubug” ( Pandemic ) and villagesbecome cemeteries as people die even before they can bury their dead.
    Miss 4.1 : Corpses are scattered everywhere, and the stench is unbearable.
    Miss 4.2 : The only person able to defeat the witch is Mpu Baradah.
    FROM : EKA PRASTIYOWATI.
    NPM : 2101001320121
    CLASS : NON REG-2010

     
  37. Liswati(Non Reg 2010)

    April 7, 2011 at 19:49

    1. Paragraph
    GOLD
    Gold a precious metal is prized for two important characteristics. First of all, gold has a lustrous beauty that is resistant to corrosion. Therefore, it is suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamental purposes. Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever. For example, a macedonian coins remains as untarnished today as the day it was minted twenty – three centuries ago. Another important characteristic of gold is its usefulness to industry and science. For many years it has been used in hundreds of industrial applications. The most recent use of gold is in astronauts suits. Astronauts wear gold plated heat shields for protection outside spaceships. In Conclusion, gold is treasured not only for its beauty but laso for its utility.
    2. Topic Sentences : Gold
     Major Sentence : Characteristics of gold
    Minor sentence : Gold has a lustrous beauty
    Minor Sentence : Suitable for jewelry, coins, and ornamed purposes
     Major Sentence : Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever
    Minor Sentence : For example, a macedonian coins remains as untarnished
    Minor Sentence : today as the day it was minted twenty – three centuries ago
     Major Sentence : Another important characteristic of gold is its usefulness to industry and science for many years
    Minor Sentence : It has been used in hundreds of industrial applications
     Major Sntence : The most recent use of gold is in astronouts suits
    Minor Sentence : Astronouts wear gold plate heat shields for protection outside spaceships
     Conclusion : Gold is treasured not only for itsbeauty but laso for its utility

     
  38. Mochamad Ali Akbar

    April 7, 2011 at 18:55

    Nama : Wisnu
    Program studi : Pend. Bahasa Inggris 2010 ( Non – Reg )
    NPM : 2101001320083

    Bali is more familiar than Indonesia

    Bali is a famous tourist island in the world. May be compared to hawaii. There are many great place in Bali. Besakih for example, which is the largest temple in Bali province, located in the Besakih village, south of the great Gunung Agung mountain which is the highest mountain on the island of Bali. then there is the beautiful Kuta beach, Its appeal is a beautiful sea shore, and the sand is white and clean. The next is Bedugul, is one of the places / Bali tourist attraction that offers the natural beauty of mountains and lakes. A high place to make this area is always shrouded in mist and cold air. Bedugul area is part of the Tabanan regency, which has a beautiful place also, for example, the sights of Lake Beratan and Tourism Objects Eka Karya Botanical Garden Bedugul Bali, and many others. But of all the pride that something is up, I had a friend from Canada who wanted to go to Bali and he asked me, is bali part of Indonesia??? Well, So apparently they know more about Bali than Indonesia.

    Topic sentences : Bali is a famous tourist island in the world
    Mess I >> There are many great place in bali
    MiSS I >> Besakih for example, the largest temple in Bali
    MiSS II >> The Beautiful Kuta Beach
    MiSS II.1 >> Its appeal is a beautiful sea shore
    MiSS II.2 >> and the sand is white and clean
    MiSS III >> The next is Bedugul, is one of the places / Bali tourist attraction that offers the natural beauty of mountains and lakes

     
  39. Mochamad Ali Akbar

    April 7, 2011 at 18:32

    NAME : RENGGA ANGGUN PRISMIA

    Rengga
    Rengga anggun prismia is a model from Surabaya .now she is a student state of university of malang.rengga is the first daughter of mr zainal abidin and mrs ana karang.
    rengga became a famous model she won the competition of teenage model 2005 and yytv jrang –jreng 2004 . rengga is smart girl .she always gets the winner in every
    competition not only that but also she has ever become the best student in her university.
    Rengga is attractive student in her blue jeans ,she likes wearing a cotton jacket t-shirt.
    Rengga is cheerful and friendly girl .every body likes her because she is humorous and creative girl. so that’s why many people likes her and said that she is perfect and good model.
    Mass 1: rengga became a famous
    Miss 1.1: she won the competition of teenage model 2005 and yytv jrang –jreng 2004
    Mass 2: . rengga is smart girl
    Miss2.1: she always gets the winner in every competition,
    mass2.2 only that but also she has ever become the best student in her university.
    Mass 3: Rengga is attractive student
    Miss 3.1: in her blue jeans ,she likes wearing a cotton jacket t-shirt.
    Mass 4: Rengga is cheerful and friendly girl .
    Miss 4.1: every body likes her because she is humorous and creative girl
    Conclution: so that’s why many people likes her and said that she is perfect and good model

     
  40. Mochamad Ali Akbar

    April 7, 2011 at 18:31

    Name : Mar’atus Sholichah

    Malang
    Malang is one of the beautiful town in east java, Many people like in Malang, because Malang has many advantages and famous place.such us
    Malang is education place because there are many universities likes UM, UB , UMM, UIN, UNISMA , Ikip Budi Utomo etc and the most important is Ikip Budi Utomo which has succeed all of student there
    And the second Malang is beautiful place because the structure of Malang is systematic and many beautifull scenery which has shown by mayor.
    The third Malang is famous about foot ball because Malang has popular team that is Arema,and the supporters are very many
    Not only that but Malang is also famous with department store like Mog , Matos, Sarinah, Ramayana, Matahari and many visitors visit there when they go
    And the last is convenient for walking and enjoying because the place is strategic from the place
    So Malang is interesting and place
    Mass 1: Malang is education place
    Miss 1. because there are many universities likes UM, UB , UMM, UIN, UNISMA , Ikip Budi Utomo etc and the most important is Ikip Budi Utomo which has succeed all of student there
    Mass2: Malang is beautiful place
    miss 2.1: because the structure of Malang is systematic and many beautiful scenery which has shown by mayor.
    Mass 3 Malang is famous place
    Miss 3.1: about foot ball because Malang has popular team that is Arema,and the supporters are very many
    Mass 4; but Malang is also famous with department store
    Miss4.1; like Mog ,Matos, Sarinah ,Ramayana, Matahari and many visitors visit there when they go
    Conclution: And the last is convenient for walking and enjoying because the place is strategic from t he place
    So Malang is interesting place

     
  41. vanda fakhrozi

    April 7, 2011 at 18:14

    Indonesia Product but America Taste

    Want a closer look at the T-Rex fossil as the movie Night at the Museum or Mammoth fossils like the movie Ice Age. No need to go all the way to Washington, USA. Quite a trip to the Museum of Wildlife, JTP 2 you can enjoy the sensation of ancient carnivores and elephants are prehistoric. In addition to replicas of the extinct dinosaurs, also will dijunpai variety of rare animals that have been preserved from all over the continent starting from African Lion, Polar Bear, to the African Elephant which is the largest elephant species dunia.All can be enjoyed along with dioramas, wildlife dioramas drafted in such a way that is similar to their natural habitat. Also still be equipped with the Insectarium, an aquarium, the show Ice Life Show, and the knowledge space that offers a variety of unexpected things from the world of wildlife.
    With Rp.45.000 and 50,000 tickets for the weekend, visitors can enjoy more than 20 tourist facilities. In this 2 JTP there are 3 magnificent building complex that stands firmly and architecture unik.Bangunan Wildlife Museum of Greco-Roman architecture is popular with big poles, Tree Inn is a hotel concept in the super giant tree, and the last one Secret Stone Zoo a modern zoo 4 floors plus a giant wheel (giant Ferris wheel). All background Panderman Hill.
    For those who want to see animals that live enough to move into the red building to the north of the Secret Stone Zoo. Here visitors can experience different sensations, can interact more closely with animals. cage here is also unique in the setting according to the natural habitat, so animals are no longer confined within iron bars Feeding the camel or the deer, even enough to Rp. 10,000 we could feed Africa Lion directly or white tiger. Provided also children playground (playland) and water park, do not forget the 4 pieces cafe and restaurant mini kelaparan.Rute prepared for visitors who traveled about 4 km to walk leisurely, so it takes more than 4 hours to just enjoy the region Secret Zoo. For those who are tired of walking not worry, there are e-Bike rental golf car of a diverse type of fare.
    JTP concepts offered in this 2 unique and different than a family recreation can also be as a place of learning students or students who want to learn more about animals, not wrong if every day there are group study tour. So there is no harm in visiting the place this one in addition to recreation, we also can learn a lot about animals. One more thing that should not be forgotten, a time to take pictures with the Kingkong like in Holywood movie “Kingkong”. Photos will be as though we are in a grip giant Kingkong. Curious right!

    Topic sentence : Jawa Timur Park 2
    MaSS 1 : Museum of Wildlife
    MiSS 1.1 : replicas of the extinct dinosaurs
    MiSS 1.2 : wildlife dioramas
    MaSS 2 : 3 magnificent building complex
    MiSS 2.1 : tickets
    MaSS 3 : Batu Secret Zoo
    MiSS 3.1 : interact more closely with animals
    MiSS 3.2 : facilities
    MaSS 4 : Concepts offered in this 2 unique and different
    Conclusion :So there is no harm in visiting the place this one in addition to recreation, we also can learn a lot about animals

     
  42. Mochamad Ali Akbar

    April 7, 2011 at 17:56

    Nama : Mochamad Ali Akbar
    NPM : 2101001320347
    Kelas / Semest. : Ekstensi (Non Regular) / 2
    Program Studi : Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris
    Fakultas : Fakultas Pendidikan Ilmu Sosial Humaniora
    Angkatan : 2010
    SMA ISLAM PUJON
    SMA Islam Pujon is one of high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” in the region only Pujon. This agency has been established since 1983 until now. In the last three years Islamic high school of Pujon has increased and be able to carve the achievement by graduating 100%, respectively, with maximum results. In this case the SMA Islam Pujon have significant components (specifically) in supporting the success of the institution it self. The first is a teacher, a teacher or educator is someone who has an important role in education. Without a teachers or educators teaching-learning process will not run in accordance with desired goals, the average teacher in this institution has been certification, with a certification’s teacher then can be said that educators in Islamic high school of Pujon was professionals in implementing learning tasks in order to achieve national education goals. The second is students, in this case the student becomes subject to be educated by a teacher. The students of this institution from different levels. And most of the students 75% come from the area Pujon surrounding and 25% came from other regions such as; Ngantang and Batu. Then, the third part is extracurricular. Extracurricular is an important component in supporting, developing and enhancing an intelligence of students. Extracurricular contained in these intitution include ECC (English Conversation Club), Voice of SMA in the form of bulletin magazine, Scout of high school, PMR and much more. The latter is the facilities and infrastructure. Facilities and infrastructure in Islamic high school Pujon, after 2009 has increased, and changes in the field of technology. In addition, facilities and infrastructure in supporting the learning process like supply of books contained in the library of this institution is very inadequate, both of fiction and non fiction as well as other books that support students’ learning. So SMA Islam Pujon is high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” which can be categorized schools that have the best components in achieving Learning of National’s Goal in environmental community.

    Explaination (Detail) :

    Topik : SMA ISLAM PUJON
    Idea : SMA Islam Pujon is one of high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” in the region only Pujon. This agency has been established since 1983 until now. In the last three years Islamic high school of Pujon has increased and be able to carve the achievement by graduating 100%, respectively, with maximum results
    Mass 1 : The first is a teacher, a teacher or educator is someone who has an important role in education.
    Miss 1.1:Without a teachers or educators teaching-learning process will not run in accordance with desired goals.
    Miss 1.2 :The average teacher in this institution has been certification, with a certification’s teacher then can be said that educators in Islamic high school Pujon was professionals in implementing learning tasks in order to achieve national education goals.
    Mass 2: The second is students; in this case the student becomes subject to be educated by a teacher.
    Miss2.1: The students of this institution from different levels
    Miss2.2: Most of the students 75% come from the area Pujon surrounding and 25% came from other regions such as; Ngantang and Batu
    Mass 3: Then, the third part is extracurricular
    Miss3.1: Extracurricular is an important component in supporting, developing and enhancing an intelligence of students
    Miss3.2: Extracurricular contained in these institution include ECC (English Conversation Club), Voice of SMA in the form of bulletin magazine, Scout of high school, PMR and much more
    Mass4: The latter is the facilities and infrastructure
    Miss4.1: Facilities and infrastructure in Islamic high school Pujon, after 2009 has increased, and changes in the field of technology
    Miss4.2: In addition, facilities and infrastructure in supporting the learning process like supply of books contained in the library of this institution is very inadequate, both of fiction and non fiction as well as other books that support students’ learning
    Conclusion: So SMA Islam Pujon is high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” which can be categorized schools that have the best components in achieving Learning of National’s Goal in environments community.

     
  43. Rengga Prisma

    April 7, 2011 at 17:54

    Name : Mar’atus Sholichah
    Malang
    Malang is one of the beautiful town in east java, Many people like in Malang, because Malang has many advantages and famous place.such us
    Malang is education place because there are many universities likes UM, UB , UMM, UIN, UNISMA , Ikip Budi Utomo etc and the most important is Ikip Budi Utomo which has succeed all of student there
    And the second Malang is beautiful place because the structure of Malang is systematic and many beautifull scenery which has shown by mayor.
    The third Malang is famous about foot ball because Malang has popular team that is Arema,and the supporters are very many
    Not only that but Malang is also famous with department store like Mog , Matos, Sarinah, Ramayana, Matahari and many visitors visit there when they go
    And the last is convenient for walking and enjoying because the place is strategic from the place
    So Malang is interesting and place
    Mass 1: Malang is education place
    Miss 1. because there are many universities likes UM, UB , UMM, UIN, UNISMA , Ikip Budi Utomo etc and the most important is Ikip Budi Utomo which has succeed all of student there
    Mass2: Malang is beautiful place
    miss 2.1: because the structure of Malang is systematic and many beautiful scenery which has shown by mayor.
    Mass 3 Malang is famous place
    Miss 3.1: about foot ball because Malang has popular team that is Arema,and the supporters are very many
    Mass 4; but Malang is also famous with department store
    Miss4.1; like Mog ,Matos, Sarinah ,Ramayana, Matahari and many visitors visit there when they go
    Conclution: And the last is convenient for walking and enjoying because the place is strategic from t he place
    So Malang is interesting place

     
  44. jumiati elida yuni

    April 7, 2011 at 17:52

    Road Safety Begis at Scholl is program of safety campaign of riding which need to be held this time because hundreds of accidents were dominated by students. Unstable emotion and lack of awareness of riding were the major cause of accidents.

    Scholl as a place for study ought to take responsibility and make an action immediately. Work along with police departement esspecially traffic division is one way to raise student’s awareness of road safety but also build better relations with the police.

    Topic sentence: Road Safety Begins at Scholl
    Mass I: is program of safety campaign of riding which need to be held this time because hundreds of accident were dominated by students.
    Miss I: unstable emotion and lack of awareness of riding.
    Mass 2: Scholl as a place for study
    Miss 2.I: take responsibility and make an action immediately.
    Miss 2.2: Work along with police departement esspecially traffic division is one way to raise student’s awareness of road safety but also build better relations with the police.

    Name : Jumiati Elida Yuni
    Class : Non-Reg (English Department)

     
  45. Mochamad Ali Akbar

    April 7, 2011 at 17:48

    Nama : Mochamad Ali Akbar
    NPM : 2101001320347
    Kelas / Semest. : Ekstensi (Non Regular) / 2
    Program Studi : Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris
    Fakultas : Fakultas Pendidikan Ilmu Sosial Humaniora
    Angkatan : 2010
    SMA ISLAM PUJON
    SMA Islam Pujon is one of high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” in the region only Pujon. This agency has been established since 1983 until now. In the last three years Islamic high school of Pujon has increased and be able to carve the achievement by graduating 100%, respectively, with maximum results. In this case the SMA Islam Pujon have significant components (specifically) in supporting the success of the institution it self. The first is a teacher, a teacher or educator is someone who has an important role in education. Without a teachers or educators teaching-learning process will not run in accordance with desired goals, the average teacher in this institution has been certification, with a certification’s teacher then can be said that educators in Islamic high school of Pujon was professionals in implementing learning tasks in order to achieve national education goals. The second is students, in this case the student becomes subject to be educated by a teacher. The students of this institution from different levels. And most of the students 75% come from the area Pujon surrounding and 25% came from other regions such as; Ngantang and Batu. Then, the third part is extracurricular. Extracurricular is an important component in supporting, developing and enhancing an intelligence of students. Extracurricular contained in these intitution include ECC (English Conversation Club), Voice of SMA in the form of bulletin magazine, Scout of high school, PMR and much more. The latter is the facilities and infrastructure. Facilities and infrastructure in Islamic high school Pujon, after 2009 has increased, and changes in the field of technology. In addition, facilities and infrastructure in supporting the learning process like supply of books contained in the library of this institution is very inadequate, both of fiction and non fiction as well as other books that support students’ learning. So SMA Islam Pujon is high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” which can be categorized schools that have the best components in achieving Learning of National’s Goal in environmental community.

    Explaination (Detail):

    Topik : SMA ISLAM PUJON
    Idea : SMA Islam Pujon is one of high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” in the region only Pujon. This agency has been established since 1983 until now. In the last three years Islamic high school of Pujon has increased and be able to carve the achievement by graduating 100%, respectively, with maximum results
    Mass 1 : The first is a teacher, a teacher or educator is someone who has an important role in education.
    Miss 1.1:Without a teachers or educators teaching-learning process will not run in accordance with desired goals.
    Miss 1.2 :The average teacher in this institution has been certification, with a certification’s teacher then can be said that educators in Islamic high school Pujon was professionals in implementing learning tasks in order to achieve national education goals.
    Mass 2: The second is students; in this case the student becomes subject to be educated by a teacher.
    Miss2.1: The students of this institution from different levels
    Miss2.2: Most of the students 75% come from the area Pujon surrounding and 25% came from other regions such as; Ngantang and Batu
    Mass 3: Then, the third part is extracurricular
    Miss3.1: Extracurricular is an important component in supporting, developing and enhancing an intelligence of students
    Miss3.2: Extracurricular contained in these institution include ECC (English Conversation Club), Voice of SMA in the form of bulletin magazine, Scout of high school, PMR and much more
    Mass4: The latter is the facilities and infrastructure
    Miss4.1: Facilities and infrastructure in Islamic high school Pujon, after 2009 has increased, and changes in the field of technology
    Miss4.2: In addition, facilities and infrastructure in supporting the learning process like supply of books contained in the library of this institution is very inadequate, both of fiction and non fiction as well as other books that support students’ learning
    Conclusion: So SMA Islam Pujon is high schools with the status of “PRIVATE” which can be categorized schools that have the best components in achieving Learning of National’s Goal in environments community.

     
  46. sugi astuti

    April 7, 2011 at 16:17

    The trouble living in Malang
    A traffic jam is offen occur in Malang it’s because by so many transportasions tool, but there is no broadening of road. Not just a traffic jam, but also about jobless, so many people have no a good job. Another matter is about a rubbish, that is because a large of population. The effect a large of population is flood matter there is no awareness of the people to throw a rubbish into the dustbin. Living in Malang very hard because so many trouble in Malang.

    Mass 1 : A traffic jam is offen occur in Malang
    Miss 1.1 : many transportasions tool
    Miss 1.2 : no broadening of road
    Mass 2 : about jobless
    Miss 2.1 : many people have no a good job
    Mass 3 : about a rubbish
    Miss 3.1 : because a large of population
    Mass 4 : is flood
    Miss 4.1 : there is no awareness of the people to throw a rubbish into the dustbin
    Conclution : Living in Malang very hard because so many trouble in Malang

    Name :Sugi Astuti
    Jur : B.inggris non reg 2010

     
  47. sugi astuti

    April 7, 2011 at 16:16

    The trouble living in Malang
    A traffic jam is offen occur in Malang it’s because by so many transportasions tool, but there is no broadening of road. Not just a traffic jam, but also about jobless, so many people have no a good job. Another matter is about a rubbish, that is because a large of population. The effect a large of population is flood matter there is no awareness of the people to throw a rubbish into the dustbin. Living in Malang very hard because so many trouble in Malang.

    Mass 1 : A traffic jam is offen occur in Malang
    Miss 1.1 : many transportasions tool
    Miss 1.2 : no broadening of road
    Mass 2 : about jobless
    Miss 2.1 : many people have no a good job
    Mass 3 : about a rubbish
    Miss 3.1 : because a large of population
    Mass 4 : is flood
    Miss 4.1 : there is no awareness of the people to throw a rubbish into the dustbin
    Conclution : Living in Malang very hard because so many trouble in Malang

    Name :Sugi Astuti
    Jur : B.inggris non reg 2010

     
  48. noor azizah nonreg 2010

    April 7, 2011 at 12:56

    Topic idea: the beauty of my garbage collection

    Mass 1: plastic waste
    Miss 1.1: former beverage bottles
    1.2: wrap detergents
    Mass 2: waste paper
    Miss 2.1: Newspaper recycling
    Mass 3: organic waste
    Miss 3.1: Processed remaining coconut coir
    Mass 4: household waste
    Miss 4.1: organic fertilizer processing

    Conclusion: It turns out beautifully if we could waste recycle

    Maybe a little weird if I say my beautiful garbage collection. All because I did have a very beautiful garbage. My collection is one of the plastic waste. Examples of plastic waste that is hanging lamps made ​​from used beverage bottles, while also there is a unique bag of detergent packs. I also have a collection of waste paper such as recycled newspaper that I make photo frames. There are also collections of organic waste in the form of processed coconut husk remaining transformed into a doormat. I also do not forget to collect household waste anekah then I though into organic fertilizer. The fertilizer I use to fertilize my flowers that beauti.Turn out garbage not only pollute our homes, but could be more beautiful if we can recycle it

     
  49. yuliana mayasari

    April 7, 2011 at 12:55

    Name: Yuliana Mayasari
    NPM : 2101001320128
    Class : Non Reg (2010) Writing B

    I’m happy to be a kindergarten teacher. First, because I love children. They are cute, funny and an innocent person. Second, I have a great time when I teach them. Often their innocent words and the funny things they do make me laugh. If I have any problem, I can forget it for a while because of that.Third, I can learn how to be a good mother. Children is a good imitator and we have to very be careful to behave and to speak in front of them. Beside that, we know what kind of activities that suitable with their grade. Fourth, I can learn how to be patient. I’ve deal with various characteristic of children. There is an obedient children, spoiled, likes to make trouble and so on. Based on their characteristic, I have to treat them in different ways. I can get a lot of advantages from my job, that’s why I’m very enjoy it.

    Topic Sentence : I’m happy to be a kindergarten teacher.
    MaSS 1: First, because I love children
    MiSS 1.1: They are cute, funny and an innocent person
    MaSS 2: Second, I have a great time when I teach them
    MiSS 2.1: Often their innocent words and the funny things they do make me laugh.
    MiSS 2.2: If I have any problem, I can forget it for a while because of that
    MaSS 3: Third, I can learn how to be a good mother.
    MiSS 3.1: Children is a good imitator and we have to very be careful to behave and to speak in front of them.
    MiSS 3.2: Beside that, we know what kind of activities that suitable with their grade.
    MaSS 4: Fourth, I can learn how to be patient
    MiSS 4.1: I’ve deal with various characteristic of children.
    MiSS 4.2: There is an obedient children, spoiled, likes to make trouble and so on.
    MiSS 4.3: Based on their characteristic, I have to treat them in different ways
    Conclusion: I can get a lot of advantages from my job, that’s why I’m very enjoy it.

     
  50. iis astutik nonreg 2010

    April 7, 2011 at 12:00

    Many exotic beaches in the south of Malang. Where the first Balekambang Coast beach conditions there are very clean and white, so it looks shiny when sunset.Uniqueness of this beach is the existence of two adjacent islands, and one which contains a temple. That the two most interesting Ngliyep.Coast of Ngliyep are big waves. while the location is in the district Donomulyo.It into three is kondangmerak beach, located next to the beach Balekambang. The attraction of this beach is an unspoiled coastal state. There visitors are still rare here so visitors can enjoy the natural authenticity of the beach. The fourth beach is a Sendangbiru beach . This beach is very crowded beaches, because there are still many fishermen who catch fish. There are also fish auction so that visitors can simply buy fish for gift. Now we know a lot of exotic beaches that we can visit in south Malang
    topic sentence
    exotic beach in south Malang
    major supporting idea
    1. Balekambang beach
    minor suporting idea
    a. beach conditions
    b. uniqueness
    2. ngliyep beach
    minor suporting idea
    a. big waves
    b. location ngliyep
    3. kondangmerak beach
    minor suporting idea
    a. kondangmerak attraction
    b. visitors kondangmerak
    4. sendangbiru beach
    minor suporting idea
    a. many fishermen
    b. fish auction
    conclusion
    many exotic beaches that we can visit in the south of Malang.

     
  51. Binti L Mubarokah

    April 7, 2011 at 06:48

    Name : Binti L Mubarokah
    NPM : 2101001320030
    Class : Non-Reg (English Department)
    Assigment : Writing (Paragraph Topic Sentence)

    1. Paragraph

    Marketing is an interesting job. The first reason is “being mobile, because we know the area very well. And also we can refresh our mind. The second is “talkative”, people who work in marketing is demanded to be talkative in order that we can know the product, and they have to be friendly, automatically we have to be able to persuade. And then “being confident”, they are confident and don’t easily give up. They are also good-looking in order to convice the consumer. The most important thing of working in marketing is being tough since they sometimes get refusal from their consumers. The last reason is that they have “many acquaintances” for they frequently meet people, so that they become easy-going. Some people are not interested in marketing, but it is actually an interesting job if we have all of the criterias above.

    2. Topic sentence
    Topic sentence : Marketing is a interesting job
    Mass 1 : The first reason is “being mobile”.
    Miss 1 : because we know the area very well.
    Miss 2 : And also we can refresh our mind.
    Mass2 : The second is “talkative”.
    Miss 1 : people who work in marketing is demanded to be talkative in order that we can know the product.
    Miss 2 : and they have to be friendly.
    Miss 3 : automatically we have to be able to persuade
    Mass 3 : And then “being confident”.
    Miss 1 : they are confident and don’t easily give up.
    Miss 2 : They are also good-looking in order to convice the consumer.
    Miss 3 : The most important thing of working in marketing is being tough since they sometimes get refusal from their consumers.
    Mass 4 : The last reason is that they have “many acquaintances”.
    Miss 1 : for they frequently meet people.
    Miss 2 : so that they become easy-going.

    Conclusion : Some people are not interested in marketing, but it is actually an interesting job if we have all of the criterias above.

     
  52. zahriyati mushoffah

    April 6, 2011 at 21:14

    Taman Mini Indonesia Indah (The Miniature of Indonesia) is located in Jakarta. If you visit it, you will see many kinds of traditinal houses from all provinces in indonesia, amd from all of the nics. They have different shapes and architectures. Some of them are built on pillars, some of them are not. For example , the Rumah Gadang of Minangkabau from West Sumatra is built on pillars. It is important to avoid the wild animals or floods. Whereas Joglo from Java, honei and Ebei from Irian are not built on pillars.
    The similarity of the tradisional houses is that they are made of wood, becauses wood was easy to get in the forest many years ago. The modern people don’t live in traditional houses anymore now. They are not suitable; besides, the teak wood is very expensive. Nowadays, it is difficult for us to get the traditional houses in towns or villages.
    • Topic : Taman Mini Indonesi Indah
    • Major sentence 1.1 : Kinds of traditional houses from all provinces in Indonesia
    Minor sentence 1.1 : Different shapes
    Minor sentence 1.2 : Different Architectures
    • Major sentence 2.1 : Some of them are built on pillars
    Minor sentence 2.1 : Rumah Gadang Minangkabau from West Sumatra
    • Major sentence 3.1 : Some of them are not built on pillars
    Minor sentence 3.1 : Joglo from Java
    Minor sentence 3.2 : Honei and Ebei from Irian
    • Major sentence 4.1 : The similarity of the traditional houses
    Minor sentence 4.1 : Made of wood
    • Conclusion : The modern people don’t live in the traditional houses anymore
    now. They are not suitable; besides, the teak wood is very expensive. Nowadays, it is difficult for us to get the traditional houses in town or village.

     
  53. ainia pertiwi (ikip budi utomo/2101001320117)

    April 6, 2011 at 16:11

    I have two hero in my house. The first is my father. He was very care with all family members. My father gave me a lot of advice, love, and discipline. He is really loved me sincerely without expecting anything. The second is my mother. She was a very gentle loving and care with all family members. She always helped me and care for everything. My father and my mother are everything for me. They are human never forgotten in my life because they are who make my life become complete. So I can learn many things from my father and my mother to become a hero in my life.

    Topic sentence : I have two hero in my house
    Mass 1 : The first is my father
    Miss 1.1 : He was very care with all family members.
    Miss 1.2 : My father gave me a lot of advice, love, and discipline.
    Miss 1.3 : He is really loved me sincerely without expecting anything.
    Mass 2 :The second is my mother.
    Miss 2.1 :She was a very gentle loving and care with all family members.
    Miss 2.2 :She always helped me and care for everything.
    Mass 3 :My father and my mother are everything for me.
    Mass 3.1 :They are human never forgotten in my life because they are who make my life become complete..
    Conclusion : So I can learn many things from my father and my mother to become a hero in my life.

     
  54. rini novi

    April 6, 2011 at 16:02

    Nama : Rini Eliya Novida
    NPM : 210100320041
    Non reg 2010

    There are many kinds of animal in the zoo. An animal devided into four. First are wild animal as lion and tiger. They are usually eat meat. Second are tame animal as cow, giraffe and rabbit. They are usually eat grass. Third are reptiles as snake and lizard. The last are bird as eagle, parrot and dove. Many kind of animal live in those place we can called zoo.
    Topic sentence : Animals in the zoo
    1. Mass 1 : wild animals
    Miss 1.1 : Lion
    Miss 1.2 : Tiger
    2. Mass 2 : Tame animal
    Miss 2.1 : cow
    Miss 2.2 : giraffe
    Miss 2.3 : Rabbit
    3. Mass 3 : reptiles
    Miss 3.1 : Snake
    Miss 3.2 : lizard
    4. Mass 4 : Bird
    Miss 4.1 : eagle
    Miss 4.2 : Parrot
    Miss 4.3 : dove.

     
  55. RISWATI PUSPITA

    April 6, 2011 at 14:56

    RISWATI PUSPITA (2101001320220)
    BAHASA INGGRIS
    LIFE CYCLE OF THE MALARIA PARASITE
    Malaria is an infectious disease caused by a one celled parasite, known as plasmodium. The parasite is transmitted to humans by the bite of the female anopheles mosquito. The plasmodium parasite spends its life cycle partly in humans and partly in mosquitoes. Mosquito infected with the malaria parasite bites humans, passing cells called sporozoites into the humans bloodstream. Sporozoites travel to the liver. Each sporoziote undergoes a sexual reproduction, in which its nucleus splits to form two new cells, celled merozoites. Merozoites enter the bloodstream and infect red blood cells. In red blood cell, merozoites grow and divide to produce more merozoites, eventually causing the red blood cells to rupture. Some of the newly released merozoites go on to infect other red blood cells. Some merozoites develop into sex cells known as male and female gametocytes. Another mosquito bites the infected human, ingesting the gametocytes. In the mosquito’s stomach, the gametocytes mature. Male and female gametocytes undergo sexual reproduction, uniting to form a zygote. The zygote multiplies to form sporozoites, which travel to the mosquito’s salivary glands. If this mosquito bite another human, the cycle begins again.

    MaSS 1: Malaria is an infectious disease caused by a one celled parasite, known as plasmodium
    MiSS 1: The parasite is transmitted to humans by the bite of the female anopheles mosquito.
    MiSS 2: The plasmodium parasite spends its life cycle partly in humans and partly in mosquitoes.
    MaSS 2: . Mosquito infected with the malaria parasite bites humans, passing cells called sporozoites into the humans bloodstream
    MiSS 1: Sporozoites travel to the liver.
    MiSS 2: . Each sporoziote undergoes a sexual reproduction, in which its nucleus splits to form two new cells, celled merozoites
    MaSS 3: Merozoites enter the bloodstream and infect red blood cells.
    MiSS 1: In red blood cell, merozoites grow and divide to produce more merozoites, eventually causing the red blood cells to rupture
    MiSS 2: . Some of the newly released merozoites go on to infect other red blood cells.
    MaSS 4: Some merozoites develop into sex cells known as male and female gametocytes
    MiSS 1: Another mosquito bites the infected human, ingesting the gametocytes.
    MiSS 2: In the mosquito’s stomach, the gametocytes mature.
    MiSS 3: Male and female gametocytes undergo sexual reproduction, uniting to form a zygote

     
  56. yuliana mayasari

    April 6, 2011 at 13:59

    I’m happy to be a kindergarten teacher. First, because I love children. They are cute, funny and innocent person. Second, I have a great time when I teach them. Often their innocent words and the funny things they do make me laugh. Sometimes if I have any problem, I can forget it for a while because of that. Third, I can learn how to be a good mother. Children is a good imitator and we have to very be careful to behave and speak in front of them. beside that, I know what kind of activities which is suitable for their grade. Fourth, I can learn how to be patient. I’ve to deal with various characteristic of children.There is an obedient child, spoiled, likes to make trouble and so on.Therefore I shall treat them in different ways. Many advantages that I can get from my job that’s why I really enjoyed it.

    Topic Sentence : I’m happy to be a kindergarten teacher
    MaSS 1: First, because I love children.
    MiSS 1: They are cute, funny and innocent person.
    MaSS 2: Second, I have a great time when I teach them.
    MiSS 2.1: Often their innocent words and the funny things they do make me laugh.
    MiSS 2.2: Sometimes if I have any problem, I can forget it for a while because of that.
    MaSS 3: Third, I can learn how to be a good mother.
    MiSS 3.1: Children is a good imitator and we have to very be careful to behave and speak in front of them.
    MiSS 3.2: Beside that, I know what kind of activities which is suitable for their grade.
    MaSS 4: Fourth, I can learn how to be patient.
    MiSS 4.1: I’ve to deal with various characteristic of children.
    MiSS 4.2: There is an obedient child, spoiled, likes to make trouble and so on.
    MiSS 4.3: Therefore I shall treat them in different ways.
    Conclusion :Many advantages that I can get from my job that’s why I really enjoyed it.

    Nama :Yuliana Mayasari (nonreg 2010)
    NPM : 2101001320128

     
  57. yuliana mayasari

    April 6, 2011 at 13:53

    I’m happy to be a kindergarten teacher. First, because I love children. They are cute, funny and innocent person. Second, I have a great time when I teach them. Often their innocent words and the funny things they do make me laugh. Sometimes if I have any problem, I can forget it for a while because of that. Third, I can learn how to be a good mother. Children is a good imitator and we have to very be careful to behave and speak in front of them. beside that, I know what kind of activities which is suitable for their grade. Fourth, I can learn how to be patient. I’ve to deal with various characteristic of children.There is an obedient child, spoiled, likes to make trouble and so on.Therefore I shall treat them in different ways. Many advantages that I can get from my job that’s why I really enjoyed it.

    Topic Sentence : I’m happy to be a kindergarten teacher
    MaSS 1: First, because I love children.
    MiSS 1: They are cute, funny and innocent person.
    MaSS 2: Second, I have a great time when I teach them.
    MiSS 2.1: Often their innocent words and the funny things they do make me laugh.
    MiSS 2.2: Sometimes if I have any problem, I can forget it for a while because of that.
    MaSS 3: Third, I can learn how to be a good mother.
    MiSS 3.1: Children is a good imitator and we have to very be careful to behave and speak in front of them.
    MiSS 3.2: Beside that, I know what kind of activities which is suitable for their grade.

     
  58. Maftakhatul Fitria Risma D.

    April 6, 2011 at 11:37

    Malang city mayor, Drs. H. Peni Suparto, M, Ap. has a small stature and a more known to the public has a mustache. Mr Peni has a friendly personality, patience, and smiles. That is evidenced by the way leading the “kota bunga” for two periods, namely 2003-2008 and 2008-present.
    In his leadership, Malang city managed to carve a proud achievement. Museum Rekor Indonesia (MURI) Malang city government as the city is able to collect the highest achievement in Indonesia. It proves that the father pence able scent Malang city in the archipelago. Because of his leadership, Mr.peni of the firm quite pence, critical, and prestige.
    Topic sentence : Malang city fathers, “small”, interesting
    Mass 1: Physical
    Miss 1.1: small body
    Miss 1.2: mustache

    Mass 2: personality
    Miss 2.1: impatient
    Miss 2.2: cheap smile
    Miss 2.3: friendly

    Mass 3: achievement
    Miss 3.1: Most cities collect achievements
    Miss 3.2: 2 periods mayor

    Mass 4: leadership of Peni Suparto
    Miss 4.1: Critical
    Miss 4.2: firm
    Miss 4.3: authority

    Maftakhatul Fitria Risma Dita
    2101001320199
    English department (non Regular) 2010

     
  59. 'AINUN N'MAH

    April 6, 2011 at 07:36

    ‘AINUN NI’MAH
    2101001320119
    B.Ing NonReg 2010

    The Green Hornet, Villain who against Villains
    The green hornet is the film, which released January 14, 2011, starred Seth Rogen, who co-wrote the script with Evan Goldberg. And Jay Chou was cast as Kato. Also starring were Cameron Diaz, Edward James Olmos, and Christoph Waltz. The Green Hornet is the alter ego of Britt Reid, a newspaper publisher by day who goes out in his masked “Green Hornet” identity at night to fight crime as a vigilante. He is accompanied by his similarly masked partner and confidant, Kato, who drives their technologically advanced car, the “Black Beauty.” Britt’s initial outing that culminates in him assuming the identity of the Green Hornet begins with his vandalizing his father’s statue in a fit of pique after his first meeting with Kato, his father’s mechanic. Britt concludes that the two will pose as villains in order to get closer to the real villains and eliminate the possibility of their enemies using innocents against them.

     Mass: the Green Hornet is a film
    • Miss 1: The Green Hornet is the alter ego of Britt Reid
    • Miss 2: accompanied by his similarly masked partner masked partner and confidant
    • Miss 3: The Green Hornet begins with his vandalizing his father’s statue
    • Miss 4: pose as villains in order to get closer to the real villains

     
  60. Sulianto

    April 5, 2011 at 14:58

    Name : Sulianto (nonregular/2010)
    Student’s Principal Number : 20101001320026

    Topic Sentence : Dogs are the most advantage animals.
    MaSS and MiSS :
    1. Act as companions
    1.1. “Man’s Best Friend.”

    2. Protect their owner’s property
    2.1. Protect homes, work sites, and junk yards.

    3. Work as seeing eye dogs
    3.1. Assist the blind person with crossing the street safely
    3.2. Or maneuvering through a crowded store

    4. Assist paraplegics
    4.1. A golden retriever that trails Ferdian all day long, picking up dropped items, such as his pens,
    4.2. Fetching things, such as the newspaper, that Ferdian needs.

    Conclusion : It is appropriate to choose a dog as a pet.

    Dogs are the most advantage animals. First, dogs often act as companions, giving their owners love and attention. This is why they are called “Man’s Best Friend.” Next, they protect their owner’s property. For example, they protect homes, work sites, and junk yards. They also work as seeing eye dogs, assisting the blind. For instance, they can assist the blind person with crossing the street safely or maneuvering through a crowded store. Moreover, they assist paraplegics by fetching their owners needed item. A case in point is my friend, Ferdian, who has a golden retriever that trails him all day long, picking up dropped items, such as his pens, and fetching things, such as the newspaper, that Ferdian needs. So, it is appropriate to choose a dog as a pet.

     
  61. Mulyadi

    April 5, 2011 at 14:57

    Name : Mulyadi (Extention 2010)

    Topic sentence : Radio is very advantages thing.
    MaSS :
    1. People get the information about the world as soon as possible just by listening to the radio at home.
    2. They also find entertainment
    MiSS :
    2.1. The entertainment program in the radio can as drama, music, etc.

    3. They can also use the radio to send their messages.
    MiSS :
    3.1. They can say hello to a friend or send other kinds of message just as social interaction.

    4. Radio is very important to the police, too.
    MiSS :
    4.1. During the emergencies where telephones not work and transportation in impossible using a radio will be very useful.

    Conclusion : So, it can’t be denied that radio is one of object the most needed by people.

    Radio is very advantage thing. People get the information about the world as soon as possible just by listening to the radio at home. They also find entertainment. The entertainment program in the radio can as drama, music, etc. They can also use the radio to send their messages. They can say hello to a friend or send other kinds of message just as social interaction. Radio is very important to the police, too. During the emergencies where telephones not work and transportation in impossible using a radio will be very useful. So, it can’t be denied that radio is one of object the most needed by people.

     
  62. Mansur S

    April 5, 2011 at 08:13

    Name : Mansur S (Extention 2010)

    Topic sentence : Computers are used in almost all modern life activities.
    MaSS :
    1. Just for example, computers are used in education, finance office, in the army and entertainment.

    MiSS
    1.1. In education , computers are great help for all subjects.
    1.2. It can be used both of teachers and students as multi-media device for teaching and learning.
    1.3. In financial institutions and office, computers do all transactions easier and better than humans.
    1.4. In the army, computers control simulators to help soldier training.
    1.5. And in the entertainment, for example in the cinematography, computer is something that momentously and necessary in expurgation process.

    Conclusion : So, this is not excessive if computer is called of fluency main assistant job’s people.

    Computers are used in almost all modern life activities. Just for example, computers are used in education, finance office, in the army and entertainment. In education , computers are great help for all subjects. It can be used both of teachers and students as multi-media device for teaching and learning. In financial institutions and office, computers do all transactions easier and better than humans. In the army, computers control simulators to help soldier training. And in the entertainment, for example in the cinematography, computer is something that momentously and necessary in expurgation process. So, this is not excessive if computer is called of fluency main assistant job’s people.

     
  63. Emirensiana D Ege /enlsh A 2009

    April 4, 2011 at 19:20

    The paragraph Unity.
    My opinion about this verse is:
    a. careful not developed because the words are incomplete and not yet a perfect paragraph. Supposed to be like this:
    Bernard who have studied in Europe for years, was fluent in several international languages. germany language is one who has mastered the language well, he can talk because of the ability of the language, is considered as a poyglot bernard easy.

    b.been carefully developed.

    c. Been carefully developed just placing the word in every sentence that does not irregular. for example: The first was two days on the way in the desert near lake reviewed, I swim in the lake and see the fish and enjoy the cool breeze.

     
  64. iis astutik nonreg 2010

    April 4, 2011 at 12:00

    Many exotic beaches in the south of Malang its very famouse. Where the first Balekambang Coast beach conditions there are very clean and white, so it looks shiny when sunset. The uniqueness of this beach is the existence of two adjacent islands, and one which contains a temple. That the two most interesting Ngliyep beach.the famous of Ngliyep are big waves. while the location is in the district Donomulyo.At three is kondangmerak beach, located next to the beach Balekambang. The attraction of this beach is an unspoiled coastal state. There visitors are still rare here so visitors can enjoy the natural authenticity of the beach. The fourth beach is a beach Sendangbiru. This beach is very crowded beaches, because there are still many fishermen who catch fish. There are also fish auction so that visitors can simply buy fish for gift their family at home. Now we know a lot of exotic beaches that we can visit in south Malang
    topic sentence
      exotic beach in the southern of Malang
    major supporting idea
    1. Balekambang beach
    minor suporting idea
    a. beach conditions
    b. uniqueness

    2. ngliyep beach
    minor suporting idea
    a..the famous of Ngliyep.
    b . location Ngliyep

    3. kondangmerak beach
    minor suporting idea
    a. kondangmerak attraction
    b. visitors kondangmerak

    4. sendangbiru beach
    minor suporting idea
    a.many fishermen
    b.fish auction

    conclusion
    many exotic beaches that we can visit in the southern of Malang

    sorry sir,please reply at my email. so i know when you approve my job.
    tanks ……………..

     
  65. Emirensiana D.Ege/class A/2009

    March 29, 2011 at 08:27

    Topic sentence
    My Hometown is famous natural features

    Major:
    _ ferst Wheaton River
    _second Wheaton Hill
    _Thirt amazing feature is big old tree

    Minor:
    _Which is very wide and beautiful, which is 175 FEET WIDE
    _Which is unusual because it is very steep
    _these tree stand two hundred feet tall and is probably about six hundred years old these tree laund marks are truly amazing and make my hometown a famous place

     
  66. flaviana ekagarnisa

    March 29, 2011 at 06:35

    A
    1. main idea : “VERTEBRATA”
    2. majjor.
    A. reptilia
    (minor): the animals that walk by stomach.
    ex. snake, crocodile, frog.
    the characteristic of reptilia :
    a. the temperature depend of environment.
    b. respiration by lung.
    B. Aves.
    (minor) : the lay agg animals. ex. eagle, pigeon, hawk.
    the characteristic of aves :
    a. the body protect by bur.
    b. has air pocket.
    c. aspiration by lung.
    C. Mamalia.
    (minor) : is the give such animals.
    ex. dog, mouse, pig, horse, buffalo.
    the characteristic of mamalia :
    a. have 4 foot.
    b. respiration by lung.
    c. the body temperature depend on environment.
    D. Pisces.
    (minor) : ex. pope, dolpin, melt.
    the characteristic of pisces
    a. the sape of body like circle and long.
    b. has the lower n upper jaw.
    B.
    1. Main Idea : “COLOR”
    2. Majjor
    A. Yellow.
    (minor) : yellow color the symbolize of people
    jealous and purify people.

    B. Purple.
    (minor) : the symbolize of loyal people.

    C. red color.
    (minor) : the symbolize of bravery people.

    D. Pink color.
    (minor) : the color that just were by women or girls
    and not for boys.

    C.
    1. Main Idea : “BOOKS”
    2. Majjor.
    A. Write book.
    (minor) : the book that using for write something that useful.
    B. Dictionary book.
    (minor) : the book that contain with more than one
    hundreds words. english words into
    indonesia words or on the contrary.
    C. Diary books.
    (minor) : the book using for write something that happen
    in every day. bed event and good event
    or something special.
    D.
    1. Main Idea : “COSMETICS”.

    2. Majjor
    a. Body Lotion.
    (minor) : Body lotion”
    Ex. Aulia Parfume body lotion: Auliawith
    extra fresh fragrance and derivate vitamin
    C extract helps soften and lighten your skin.
    it contains derivate vitamin E and
    extra moisturizer to maintain youthful skin.

    b. Powder.
    (minor) : Ex. MY BABY POWDER.
    My baby powder with chamomile. with its
    mild formula, fine texture and nice fragrance.
    keep’s baby’s skin soft and fragrant
    with chamomile helps to avoid mild
    irritatiirritation from baby’s skin.

     
  67. vira setia ningrum

    March 27, 2011 at 14:49

    The ‘wayang kulit’ is a shadow play. It is a culture of java. The ‘wayang kulit performance needs a screen, a special lamp, three or four banana trees, puppets, Javanese musical, instruments, Javanese musicians and singers, and a ‘dalang’. The ‘dalang’ sticks the handles of the puppets on these banana trees so the puppets can stand. The puppets, the ‘dalang’, the Javanese musicians and singers, and the lamp are in front of the screen while the spectators are behind the screen during the show they can see the shadow of the puppets on the screen. There are two groups of puppets, good characters and bad characters. The good characters are on the right-hand side of the ‘dalang’ while the bad characters are on the left-hand side. This show is a popular in Java.

    TS : The ‘wayang kulit’ is a shadow play.
    MASS :
    1. It is a culture of java.
    2. The ‘wayang kulit performance needs a screen, a special lamp, three or four banana trees, puppets, Javanese musical, instruments, Javanese musicians and singers, and a ‘dalang’.
    3. There are two groups of puppets, good characters and bad characters.
    MISS :
    1. This show is a popular in Java.
    2. – The ‘dalang’ sticks the handles of the puppets on these banana trees so the puppets can stand.
    – The puppets, the ‘dalang’, the Javanese musicians and singers, and the lamp are in front of the screen while the spectators are behind the screen during the show they can see the shadow of the puppets on the screen.
    3. The good characters are on the right-hand side of the ‘dalang’ while the bad characters are on the left-hand side.

    Introduction : The ‘wayang kulit’ is a shadow play. It is a culture of java.

    Body paragraphs : . The ‘wayang kulit performance needs a screen, a special lamp, three or four banana trees, puppets, Javanese musical, instruments, Javanese musicians and singers, and a ‘dalang’. The ‘dalang’ sticks the handles of the puppets on these banana trees so the puppets can stand. The puppets, the ‘dalang’, the Javanese musicians and singers, and the lamp are in front of the screen while the spectators are behind the screen during the show they can see the shadow of the puppets on the screen. There are two groups of puppets, good characters and bad characters. The good characters are on the right-hand side of the ‘dalang’ while the bad characters are on the left-hand side.

    Conclusion : This show is a popular in Java.

    vira setia ningrum-non reg 2010 (join in regular class-friday morning)

     
  68. Kholilur rohman

    March 27, 2011 at 14:25

    Park east Java

    in the eastern Java area there are beautiful places like Lamongan and Malang, East Java, known as park.
    Lamongan and Malang have many beautiful places like the example in Malang many beautiful places such as cuban rondo, cuban rondo is a waterfall tour. Sengkaling, there are various kinds of games ranging from kids, teens and adults. selekta, is a tourist place flowers. BNS, BNS is the Batu Night Square is open from three o’clock until three o’clock in the morning.
    as well as Lamongan, Lamongan also has beautiful places such as WBL. WBL is Lamongan marine tourism, there are various kinds of games ranging from kids, teens and adults. Maharani zoo, is a zoo attractions combined with the cave Maharani. gondang reservoirs, gondang reservoir is the reservoir created by the government Lamongan and Used as tourist attractions., usually Used by people for camping. caves akbar, akbar Caves is a hiding place Lamongan fighters against invaders and there is Also a place Used by Sunan degrees to prayers
    so East Java also not be less good with the tourist attractions in Central Java and West Java

    Main idea
    • Park east Java
    Mass
    • reservoir gondang
    • caves akbar
    • Maharani zoo
    • WBL
    • Selekta
    • Sengkaling
    • BNS
    • Cuban rondo
    • Malang city
    • Lamongan city
    Miss
    • gondang reservoir is the reservoir created by the government Lamongan and used as tourist attractions., usually used by people for camping
    • caves akbar is a hiding place Lamongan fighters against invaders and there is also a place used by Sunan degrees to prayers
    • Maharani zoo is a zoo attractions combined with the cave Maharani
    • Selekta is a flower garden tour, inside there are various kinds of beautiful flowers
    • BNS stands BATU NIGHT SQUARE. BNS open from three o’clock till three o’clock in the morning
    • cuban rondo is a waterfall tour
    • sengkalin is a recreation place which provides a variety of games ranging from kids, teens and adults
    • WBL is an abbreviation of the nautical tourism Lamongan, in which there are many different kinds of games and rides for the ana-children, adolescents and adults

    Name : Kholilur Rohman
    Class : A1
    NPM : 2101000320189

     
  69. ayyi wiji saputri

    March 27, 2011 at 12:42

    Name : ayyi wiji saputri
    Class : bahasa inggris / A1

    My family my life motivation

    I’ll tell you about my family. the first is my father. My father is a figure that is responsible and attentive to his wife and child. be a pride for me to have children like him. my mother second is my mother is a person who patiently and lovingly, he continues to maintain and care for their children to big and never felt tired, patience is what makes me very fond of I. the third is my younger brother, he is handsome and dashing, like a responsible father, who can keep the older sister and younger sister. the fourth is my sister. she was 6 years old, still naughty naughty girl but I’m very fond of him. The last is that I own. I am a sweet girl who have a very happy family. my family is something worthwhile for me to be motivated to perform live.

    Topic sentence : I’ll tell you about my family
    Mass : 1. My father
    2. my mother
    3. my younger brother
    4. my sister
    5. I am
    Miss : 1. My father is a figure that is responsible and attentive to his wife and child.
    2. my mother is a person who patiently and lovingly, he continues to maintain and care for their children to big and never felt tired, patience is what makes me very fond of I.
    3. he is handsome and dashing, like a responsible father, who can keep the older sister and younger sister.
    4. she was 6 years old, still naughty naughty girl but I’m very fond of him. The last is that I own.
    5. I am a sweet girl who have a very happy family.

    Sumarry : my family is something worthwhile for me to be motivated to perform live.

    sir, my job is finist.father subjects fun, hopefully you can patiently teach me who still do not know about what’s what. please guidance.

     
  70. anis mustorika

    March 27, 2011 at 10:32

    mother, milk has desreased

    This is now the mother does not feel worried that their children will meet the nutrient may be in reach with a relatively cheap price, some time ago had a baby goods store offers a friendly price.
        “My baby” shop may have been known by many mothers in Malang city. There are many diverse offering of milk. Among them are Bebelac milk with DHA content of nutrients and offered only a price of 80 thousand rupiah, while in other stores that milk prices are relatively more expensive. Pediasure is still great demand, traders who would sell them elsewhere.
       Many of the lower classes prefer SGM milk prices that are very friendly with the objec economy. But whatever the exact choice of the mother, maternal love with milk prices down.

    (TS) MOTHER, MILK HAS DECREASED
    1. Bebelac ( mass}
    2. while in other store…..(miss)

    1. pediasure (mass)
    2. ….trader who…(miss)

    1 SGM (mass)
    2 but whatever…(miss)

     
  71. Mentari Sulistyaningsih

    March 27, 2011 at 09:13

    Topic sentence : Mother , The Most Influential Female All Over The World

    Mass : She is the strongest female for everyone
    Miss : 1) 9 months through the hard pregnancy time
    2) she fights to give birth us into the world
    3) she take care us from the first time we see the world and when we grow up

    Mass : She fights to our life
    Miss : 1)She always there when we need
    2)She take care , make it save and happiness in our childhood
    3)She can be everything that we want in our adult

    Mass : She become our guide for our life an called influential female, what ever our status or position in this world
    Miss : 1) she teach us how to pass this life like her
    2) she guide us and inspire our valuable way of life

     
  72. IVA OKTA RAHAYU

    March 27, 2011 at 07:51

    Iva Okta Rahayu
    Pend. ENGLISH 2010 “A”
    WRITING 1
    TASK 1. !

    TOPIC SENTENCE : Hypno Parenting

    1. MASS : LOVE LANGUAGES
    MISS : said support, service, quality time, gifts & touch

    2. MASS : HYPNO SLEEPING
    MISS : hypnosis with hypnosleeping

    3. MASS: MILTON MODEL
    MISS : magic words, the more pattern, the softening phrase, te stop pattern, forced choice / double bind.

    4. MASS: ARTISTRY
    MISS : rebound song, dance / movement.

    5. MASS: EDUCATION
    MISS : cost, facilities ..

    I also send my assignment in your email . !
    Thank You ,,

     
  73. mia karuniasih

    March 27, 2011 at 07:25

    topic sentences: an unique island (west borneo)
    body sentences-supporting sentences
    *major sentences: *minor sentences:
    -language -melayu, dayak, iban, kapuas hulu
    -behaviour -boat competition, cannon competition
    -culture -buang-buang, antar ajong, tapung tawar
    -food -temet, bubur pedas, kue lapis, gabuk, dodol lidah buaya
    -song -kerupuk basah, sungai kapuas, sambas kebanjiran

     
  74. febriani/class:A1

    March 27, 2011 at 07:25

    topic: the impact of the oil palm plantation
    Mass:Negative and positive
    Miss:Negative~badlands
    ~lanslide
    ~hot weather
    Positive~open employment
    ~depelove project

     
  75. sabdi

    March 27, 2011 at 07:20

    Fascinated by the beauty of malang town
    -Shopping center : – GAJAH MADA
    – MATOS
    – MOG
    – MALANG PLAZA
    – MATAHARI
    -University : – UIN
    – Brawijaya
    – IKIP BU
    – Muhammadiyah
    -Unisma
    -Recreational Parks :- Town Squre
    -Foot ball Stadium :- Gajayana
    – Kenjuruhan

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      April 9, 2011 at 14:29

      Dear Mr. Sabdi,

      correction:
      That’s a good topic sentence, but please be more focused on the topic sentence you’ve said. I don’t think the first and second MaSS about Shopping Center and University will be the relevant parts of Malang Beauty. Can you find more reasonable and relevant Ideas?

      I’m sure you can make it better.

       
  76. AMOR ERVIAN PUTRA

    March 27, 2011 at 07:10

    WRITING I ASSIGNMENT AMOR E.P
    TOPIC SENTENCE CLASS A
    2101000320114

    MOG is a good departmentstore. It is very modern and clean inside. It has a large parking lot which able to hold many visitor’s vehicles. Departmentstore should always be clean. Teenagers like to sit, have tea, coffee, or a soft drink, and gossip there after school. MOG is a good place to buy food, clothes, accesories, tools, and many things. There is always a large choice, and the Prices are always reasonable.
    MOG is a good departmentstore. Is a topic sentences, the topic is MOG and the controlling idea is good
    It is very modern and clean inside. Is MASS
    It has a large parking lot which able to hold many visitor’s vehicles. Is MASS
    Departmentstore should always be clean. Is MASS
    Teenagers like to sit, have tea, coffee, or a soft drink, and gossip there after school. Is MASS
    MOG is a good place to buy food, clothes, accesories, tools, and many things. Is MASS
    There is always a large choice, and the Prices are always reasonable. Is MISS

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      April 9, 2011 at 14:22

      Dear mr. Amor

      This’s a good paragraph. You’ve talked about the description of something.
      Would you make it in a frame? Just mention like this:
      Topic Sentence: ______________
      MaSS 1: ____________________
      MiSS 1.1: __________________
      MiSS 1.2: __________________
      MaSS 2: ____________________
      MiSS 2.1: __________________
      MiSS 2.2: __________________
      and so on.
      Please don’t forget to put also the Conclusion in the bottom.
      To make it more readable. Ok? I want you get better.

       
      • amor ervian putra

        April 17, 2011 at 20:14

        Topic Sentence: MOG is a good departmentstore
        MaSS 1: It is very modern and clean inside
        MaSS 2: It has a large parking lot which able to hold many visitor’s vehicles
        MaSS 3: Departmentstore should always be clean
        MaSS 4: Teenagers like to sit, have tea, coffee, or a soft drink, and gossip there after school
        MaSS 5: MOG is a good place to buy food, clothes, accesories, tools, and many things
        MiSS 5.1: There is always a large choice, and the Prices are always reasonable

         
  77. putriyanto

    March 27, 2011 at 04:27

    below is the comment of the dity you gave to me :
    topic sentences : spectacular culture in salt island (madura)
    body sentences – supporting sentences :
    major sentences : minor sentences
    1. sumenep reagency(culture) redbull competition(kerapsapi)
    2 .pamekasan regency(education) wager club
    3.sampang regency fluent tradition
    4.bangkalan regency tandak madura

    i am so sorry sir i cant give the best for the comment and also if you want to reply your comment you should reply to this e-mail because my e-mail is out of order .

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      April 9, 2011 at 14:18

      Dear mr. Putriyanto

      I like your Topic Sentence, But would you make it in a frame? Just mention like this:
      Topic Sentence: Spectacular cultures in “Salt Island”
      MaSS 1: ____________________
      MiSS 1.1: __________________
      MiSS 1.2: __________________
      MaSS 2: ____________________
      MiSS 2.1: __________________
      MiSS 2.2: __________________
      and so on.
      Please don’t forget to put also the Conclusion in the bottom.
      Ok? I want you get better.

       
      • putriyanto (riyan) english class A

        April 17, 2011 at 14:07

        =====spectacular culture in salt island =======
        madura is an island located in east java and many people call it “salt island” . madura can devided into four area is like sumenep , pamekasan , sampang , and bangkalan the west of madura and also each regency has unique traditional costum and also unique culture . in madura wellknown with “kerapan sapi”and also there many other culture is like saronen , ludruk , tandak etc
        maSS 1 : sumenep
        miss 1.1 : saronen
        maSS 2:pamekasan
        miss2.2 : tandak
        maSS 3:sampang
        miss 3.1:
        mass4 L: bankalang
        miss 4.1: kerapan sapi (bullrace )
        conclusion : so madura island is very unique with culture and so the madura is devided into part are like sumenep , pamekasan , sampang , bangkalan and madura wellknwon with kerapan sapi “bullrace “

         
  78. eni

    March 27, 2011 at 04:19

    topics sentences : the historical resort in West Borneo
    supporting sentences :
    major sentences : minor sentences :
    1. jawai 1. puteri serai beach
    2 .pemangkat 2.tanjung batu
    3 .singkawang 3.pasir panjang beach
    4 . pontianak 4.kijing beach

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      April 9, 2011 at 14:16

      Dear ms. Eni

      I like your Topic Sentence, But would you make it in a frame? Just mention like this:
      Topic Sentence: ______________
      MaSS 1: ____________________
      MiSS 1.1: __________________
      MiSS 1.2: __________________
      MaSS 2: ____________________
      MiSS 2.1: __________________
      MiSS 2.2: __________________
      and so on.
      Please don’t forget to put also the Conclusion in the bottom.
      Ok? I want you get better.

       
  79. friska yuniarsih

    March 27, 2011 at 04:11

    topic sentences : the greatest different language in West Borneo
    body sentences – supporting sentences :
    major sentences : minor sentences :
    1. sambas melayu daerah
    2 .bengkayang dayak
    3 .pontianak melayu pontianak
    4. batu layang madura

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      April 9, 2011 at 14:13

      Dear ms. Friska

      I like your Topic Sentence, But would you make it in a frame? Just mention like this:
      Topic Sentence: ______________
      MaSS 1: ____________________
      MiSS 1.1: __________________
      MiSS 1.2: __________________
      MaSS 2: ____________________
      MiSS 2.1: __________________
      MiSS 2.2: __________________
      and so on.
      Please don’t forget to put also the Conclusion in the bottom.
      Ok? I want you get better.

       
  80. Retno Dewi Puji Utami/English A

    March 26, 2011 at 17:33

    Excusme Sir….
    I sent my assigment passed e-mail.
    Thank You…

     
  81. Maria Susanti

    March 26, 2011 at 13:46

    Nama : Maria susanti
    Kelas : Bahasa Inggris A / 2010
    Nim : –

    TS: The BBC Word Service radio station broadcasts various highly selected programmes.
    MASS: News Hour, Rock salad,Good Book,Drama by Radio,In Praise of God.
    MISS: Listening to the 60-minute report from around the world.
    The producer of this programme always chooses a new and high quality book to review.
    Should not be excluded from this list because a great number of listeners enjoy this music show.
    In Praise of God” as one of the highly assorted programmes too.

    My comment about the paragraph ;
    the paragraph already good because has the topic sentences, attitude, and relevant. many programme which can listeners like and enjoy with the programmes. All programmes which the BBC radio station has give already interested. But from the all, have programme which the listeners should not be exclused especially rock salad because the listeners enjoy with music. So i think that this paragraph good because can explain about all programmes which they have and honest about programmes which the listeners like and which the listeners dont like.

     
  82. Inggrit Wahyu Putri

    March 26, 2011 at 07:42

    Name: Inggrit Wahyu Putri
    Class: English Language A / 2010

    Topic Sentences: cat care
    1. Mass: cat food
    Miss: the fish, meat, and fish snacks
    2. Mass: bathe the cat
    Miss: need to shampoo and wash their feathers
    3. Mass: enhance your cat’s fur
    Miss: combing with a soft, arranging them neatly
    4. Mass: playing with the cat
    Miss: cats love to play ball and thread
    5. Mass: cat health conscious
    Miss: take her check at the vet once a month

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      April 9, 2011 at 14:10

      Dear ms. Inggrit

      Well done!
      Can you elaborate more MiSSes? That’s gonna be excellent!

       
  83. Sendi Hardiyanti

    March 26, 2011 at 05:51

    Topic sentence : The biggest kingdom in java ( Majapahit )

    Mass : Location of Majapahit
    Miss : In trowulan, Mojokerto, East Java

    Mass : The King of Majapahit
    Miss : Raden Wijaya : (1309)
    Jayanegara : (1309-1328)
    Tribhuwanatunggaldewi : (1328-1350)
    Hayam Wuruk : (1350-1389)
    Wikramawardhana : (1389-1429)
    Suhita : (1429-1447)
    Kertawijaya : (1447-1451)
    Rajasawardhana : (1451-1453)
    Bhre Wengker : (1456-1466)
    Singhawikramawardhana : (1466-1468)
    Kertabhumi : (1468-1478)
    Ranawijaya/Girindrawardhana : (1478-?)

    Mass : Period of Kingdom
    Miss : 1350 – 1389 M

    Mass : Religious in Majapahit
    Miss : Buddism , Shaivism , and Vaishnaishm

    Mass : Administration in Majapahit
    Miss : It employed a well organized bureaucratic

    Mass : Heritage from Majapahit Kingdom
    Miss : Bajangratu temple
    Panataran temple

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      March 31, 2011 at 14:58

      Topic sentence : The biggest kingdom in Java ( Majapahit )

      Mass : Location of Majapahit
      Miss : In trowulan, Mojokerto, East Java

      Mass 1: The King of Majapahit
      Miss 1:
      Raden Wijaya : (1309)
      Jayanegara : (1309-1328)
      Tribhuwanatunggaldewi : (1328-1350)
      Hayam Wuruk : (1350-1389)
      Wikramawardhana : (1389-1429)
      Suhita : (1429-1447)
      Kertawijaya : (1447-1451)
      Rajasawardhana : (1451-1453)
      Bhre Wengker : (1456-1466)
      Singhawikramawardhana : (1466-1468)
      Kertabhumi : (1468-1478)
      Ranawijaya/Girindrawardhana : (1478-?)

      Mass 2: Period of Kingdom
      Miss 2: 1350 – 1389 M

      Mass 3: Religion
      Miss 3: Buddism , Shaivism , and Vaishnaishm

      Mass 4: Administration in Majapahit
      Miss 4: It employed a well organized bureaucratic

      Mass 5: Heritage from Majapahit Kingdom
      Miss 5: Bajangratu temple, Panataran temple

      VERY GOOD, It will be an interesting paragraph.

       
  84. hidayatul ismiyah

    March 26, 2011 at 04:09

    TOPIC SENTENCE :
    The archipelago of Indonesia
    MASS :
    1. Java
    2. Sumatra
    3. Kalimantan
    4. Sulawesi
    5. Bali
    MISS :
    1. Central of Government
    2. There are a big forest
    3. Famous of gold
    4. Popular of the sea
    5. Exotic island

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      April 9, 2011 at 14:08

      Dear ms. Hidayatul,
      I appreciate your ideas, but would you make it in a frame? Just mention like this:
      Topic Sentence: ______________
      MaSS 1: ____________________
      MiSS 1.1: __________________
      MiSS 1.2: __________________
      MaSS 2: ____________________
      MiSS 2.1: __________________
      MiSS 2.2: __________________
      and so on.
      Please don’t forget to put also the Conclusion in the bottom.
      Ok? I want you get better.

       
  85. Arin Kusmidah (English A1)

    March 26, 2011 at 03:47

    Assalamu’alaikum..
    Sir, I’ve completed the task that you provided, please check your email … thanks.

     
  86. hidayatul ismiyah

    March 26, 2011 at 03:27

    TOPIC SENTENCE :
    The archipelago of Indonesia
    MASS :
    1. Java
    2. Sumatra
    3. Kalimantan
    4. Sulawesi
    5. Bali
    MISS :
    1. Central of Government
    2. There are a big forest
    3. Famous of gold
    4. Popular of the sea
    5. Exotic island

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      March 31, 2011 at 14:53

      Correction:
      TOPIC SENTENCE : The archipelago of Indonesia
      MASS :
      1. Java
      MISS: – Characteristic of the Island
      – Population
      – etc.
      2. Sumatra
      MISS: – Characteristic of the Island
      – Population
      – etc.
      3. Kalimantan
      4. Sulawesi
      5. Bali

      Suggestion:
      Between your MASS and MISS have no relevancy. You’ve to link them. Ok?

      Good Job

       
      • Hidayatul Ismiah

        April 2, 2011 at 07:17

        TOPIC SENTENCE : The archipelago of Indonesia
        MASS :
        1. Java
        MISS: – Characteristic of the Island
        -Population is very big
        -Central of government
        -Central of Muslim

        2. Sumatra
        MISS: – Characteristic of the Island
        – Big population
        – Big forest

        3. Kalimantan
        MISS: – Characteristic of the Island
        -Big forest
        -central of industry

        4. Sulawesi
        MISS: – Characteristic of the Island
        -Little Population
        -location between kalimantan island and irian jaya island

        5. Bali
        MISS: – Characteristic of the Island
        -Central of Hindu and Buddha
        -Beautiful Place
        -Exotic island

        I’m sorry sir,it is correction from me. I hope you correct again and please give me comment and suggestion.

         
  87. Norhani kelas A-2

    March 25, 2011 at 12:20

    Topic sentence : Uniquely the Florest Island
    Mass : location of florest island
    Miss : -beautiful place at the florest island
    -the peoples at the florest island
    -regional language at the florest island

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      March 31, 2011 at 14:48

      Correction:
      Topic sentence : Uniqueness Florest Island
      Mass 1 : location of florest island
      Miss 1: -beautiful place at the florest island

      Mass 2: the people of florest island
      Miss 2: regional language at the florest island

      Suggestion:
      If you have other different information, just put it in different Major Sup. Idea.
      Good Job

       
  88. Leni kelas A-2

    March 25, 2011 at 12:06

    Topic Sentence : The Secret of Beauty Treatments
    Mass : The Kinds of Beauty Treatment
    Miss : -The Products of Beauty Treatment
    -The Effects of Beauty Treatment
    -Costs of Beauty Treatment
    -The Advantage of Beauty Treatment

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      March 31, 2011 at 14:40

      Correction for Ms. Leni:
      Topic Sentence : The Secret of Beauty Treatments
      Mass : The Kinds of Beauty Treatment
      Miss :
      -The Products of Beauty Treatment
      -The Effects of Beauty Treatment
      -Costs of Beauty Treatment
      -The Advantage of Beauty Treatment

      If we talk about the secret, I think it’s not necessary to talk about the cost. It won’t be a secret again.
      Suggestion: Add more MASSes.
      Good Job.

       
  89. Monika Lara kelas A-2

    March 25, 2011 at 11:57

    Topic sentence: Glamorous of the celebrity lifestyle.
    Mass : celebrity behavior.
    Miss : -Celebrity fashion style.
    -Sensational celebrity Love story.
    -Bright career of celebrity.

     
    • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

      March 31, 2011 at 14:36

      Correction:
      Topic sentence: Glamorous celebrity lifestyle.
      Mass : celebrity lifestyle
      Miss :
      – Celebrity fashion style.
      – Sensational celebrity Love story.
      – Career of celebrity.

      That’s good, Please enlarge your idea.

       
  90. andika dewantara

    March 25, 2011 at 02:29

    Today is talking about Topic Sentence and its Major and Minor Supporting Sentences. Implementing on Tree Diagram. (March 25,2011)

     
    • tuah

      April 6, 2011 at 09:58

      Tuah
      Pendidikan Bahasa Inggris
      NIM:2101001320211

      LETTERS
      COMPOSITION
      VOCABULARY
      GRAMMAR
      CONSTRUCTION
      MACHINE
      COMPUTER
      ENGLISH FOR TRANSLATION
      ENGLISH FOR TECHNOLOGY
      ENGLISH FOR ECONOMY
      English for professional
      HOTEL
      ENGLISH FOR TOURISM
      CLERCK
      OFFICE
      TOUR DRIVER
      GUIDE

      English for professional is now a very important thing. It is used for special purpose. It is divided into four parts, such as : English for tourism, English for technology, English for economy and English for translation. English for tourism is used to handle the tourism. They who must learn it are the person who works as a guide, hotel worker or tour driver. Guide brings tourists to tourism objects. Hotel worker works in a hotel and tour driver takes the tourists to tourism objects. Then English for technology is used to do in technology. Such as English is applied in computer program. It is also used in machine. And it is for construction, too. English for economy is for speaking in bussiness. It is used for an officer, a clerck or a letter writer. English for translation is used for translator. It is how to translate in a good way in English. If we want to be a good translator, we must understand about grammar, vocabulary and sense of composition. That’s why English for professional is very important to be learnt, because it is applied in many places to work.

      INFORMATION:

      English for professional is now a very important thing. It is used for special purpose. (main idea)
      It is divided into four parts, such as : English for tourism, English for technology, English for economy and English for translation. (supporting idea)
      English for tourism is used to handle the tourism. They who must learn it are the person who works as a guide, hotel worker or tour driver. Guide brings tourists to tourism objects. Hotel worker works in a hotel and tour driver takes the tourists to tourism objects. Then English for technology is used to do in technology. Such as English is applied in computer program. It is also used in machine. And it is for construction, too. English for economy is for speaking in bussiness. It is used for an officer, a clerck or a letter writer. English for translation is used for translator. It is how to translate in a good way in English. If we want to be a good translator, we must understand about grammar, vocabulary and sense of composition. (pengembangan supporting idea)
      . That’s why English for professional is very important to be learnt, because it is applied in many places to work. (conclusion)

       
      • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

        April 9, 2011 at 13:58

        dear ms. Tuah,
        You’ve made a good paragraph grammatically and you’ve analyzed it well. But would you make it in a frame? Just mention like this:
        Topic Sentence: ______________
        MaSS 1: ____________________
        MiSS 1.1: __________________
        MiSS 1.2: __________________
        MaSS 2: ____________________
        MiSS 2.1: __________________
        MiSS 2.2: __________________
        and so on.
        Please don’t forget to put also the Conclusion in the bottom.
        Ok? I want you get better.

         
    • novi sisca rosana

      April 6, 2011 at 15:35

      Novi sisca rosana
      kelas ekstensi 2010

      Topic sentence: Easy Ways Make Your Own Business
      Mass 1: Type of business
      Miss1.
      1. Mini market
      2. Restaurant
      3. Cellural service center
      4. Cafe, etc
      Mass 2: Strategy Business
      Miss 2.
      1. From mouth to mouth
      2. by Pamphlet
      3. Advertisements in newspapers
      4. Advertisement on television
      Mass 3: Location
      Miss 3.
      1. At your own house
      2. Take advantage of where you work, college or school.
      Mass 4: Capital
      Miss 4.
      1. Your own money ( Cash money)
      2. Loan

       
      • MGMP BAHASA INGGRIS

        April 9, 2011 at 14:01

        Dear ms. Novi,
        That’s good frame. I like it. Indeed, It can inspire your fellows. But there is still one thing left. Would you develop it into its paragraph?
        That’s gonna be better.

         

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